The
Toast Point
Haiku Contest!
Since 1995!
A Japanese Garden of Verse
Entries from June, 1998
Stephanie writes 6/31
Lycopersicon
Tomato - Loved and humble
Slow and steady, fruit.
Bodi writes 06/30/98
At Stalag Thirteen,
Was Hogan Bodishatva?
Think about that one.
Soft, red, velvety,
the lips of the rosebuds part
flowers full and lush
Bob S. writes 06/30/98
Warmongering Japs
Flying Zero fighter planes
December seventh
She woke me at dawn
Sleeping on the muddy rocks
Her smile bathed my soul
days of June are gone
picnics foretell warmer times
hand me ice for drinks
The poet comments, "Tiny says hello to all.
"
DeVar writes 06/29/98
sitting alone in his room
a poor final report card
despondent young man
The poet comments, "He really didn't have a choice. He was grounded."
fresh bear evidence
a pile on the hiking path
abrupt return home
stir-fried emotions
tepid response to pleasure
need to get outdoors
Single, white lily,
Blooming beauty, not shadowed
By clam'ring flora.
Nature nurtures me
In concert with her crickets'
Sunset serenade.
She who leads needs seeds
Of loving, Divinely sown,
To close the circle.
Honor the hero,
Who traded spring for autumn
And saved my sweet ass.
Joe Gill writes 06/29/98
Painting beneath fear
Brush strokes release my demons
Jagged summer sky
Slimy stone pathway
Whetting curiosity
Through the pool of souls
A patient hawk rests
A dead tree his companion
They talk of summer
shioP writes 06/29/98
How tragic you are!
Melt away in summer heat
My love Choco-Mint
The poet comments, "For my teacher,moose.Thank you."
Yuka writes 06/29/98
breeze from the window
a wind-bell singing calmly
mixing with cricket
The poet comments, "it is a haiku in the summer night.
This is Yuka's first English haiku from our English poetry class- David Freedman teacher.
"
Scattered beach towels
With many Kens and Barbies
No bathing suit fear
His stutter tottered
On the very tip of his
Teetering t-tongue.
She is the widow
In the window. She is the
Crone who lives alone.
A naked couple
In flagrante delicto.
Sepia photo.
It is time to put
Your money where your mouth is.
Swallow your wallet.
A single flower
crushed on the hospital floor
Red against crimson
good day to sleep late--
Early morning daylilies
hiding from the rain
Overgrown garden
can't tell the weeds from flowers--
too hot to worry
In the hushed forest
Lies the the stately lonesome pine
Its beauty, ageless.
The poet comments, "I kinda liked it...How about you?"
The flower blossoms
Into a flame of crimson
Delighting the soul
a grunt, bark or cry
convey the same idea
want, cool clear water
eyes glued to sunset
early Indian Summer's
red hued splashing sky
Don't eat the yellow
snow; Mom said "Don't be naughty
eskimo, Nanook."
The poet comments, "This was one of a series of freestyle poems I used in a battle of haiku against a random haiku generator program. I WON"
Jeez, with the Joni Mitchell and Frank Zappa quotes, Toast Point is flashing back to his sister's record collection when she
was in high school. Toast Point was a nerd - he was listening to classical at the time.
darkling ground beetle
nodding antenae returns
to fecund soil home
Circling the sun
Her satellite circles her
Spinning eternal
The poet comments, "I have been writing poetry for almost 15 years, but have just started to explore haiku.
I remember learning about it in third grade... it was re-introduced to me in a joke about computer warning messages a short while ago.
Since then I have not been able to stop writing them."
submitting haiku
rolling thunder from the east
have to shut down qui
The poet comments, "
Didn't shut down "qui" enough! My computer was hit by lightning! Modem...fried!"
Toast Point had that happen to him once while faxing resumes.
he left me last week
his scent lingers in a shirt
I wear it to bed
Marc S. writes 06/25/98
that prickle-tickle feeling
freshly cut grass
in my shoes
Simon R writes 06/24/98
This time it's final
I will not cast you lifelines.
(Now say you love me)
Stuart Reed writes 06/24/98
Haiku writers think
That seventeen syllables
Make a miracle.
Not always, but sometimes.
Well don't it always
Seem to go that you don't know
What you've got till it's
I hear hollow hearts
I feel eyes rolling by me
Freedom lies within
The sun is revealed
Filtered through a covered sky
Porthole to the stars
Marc S. writes 06/24/98
summer heat -
waves shimmer
on sea of asphalt
The poet comments, "its gonna be a hot one this year...ugh!"
Pumpkin gold, burnt red
Crisp, twirling pages of time
drifting down past us.
Big white ducks bob
playing in drizzly rain.
Marshmallows float.
With your turn of phrase
You devastate me wholly
Language is our god
Glowing with desire
They will flash in secret codes
Until the morning
Lines can not capture
His innocence or smile, so
I must remember
Star writes 06/23/98
A good hand of cards
Is no use to a player
Unless they're played well
Ancho writes 06/23/98
sick and sluggish fish
put out of his misery
enriches garden
an open doorway,
her face upturned.
her brown hair sighs with the Autumn winds.
The poet comments, "This is the first haiku I have ever written. Hope you enjoy it. :)"
In milder climates,
Sun is a tender lover,
here - an angry God.
Under pallid skies
The air’s so dry it crackles
as my path unfolds.
Bright and treacherous:
ruse of Indian summer,
spell of the desert.
LOWCOO writes 06/22/98
Eskimos rub noses
And share their wives
It's snowing outside
Shelley writes 06/22/98
Setting Sun
The sun is setting
The world is falling asleep
But I sit awake
evening, I yawn
reaching toward a lamp, I pause
moon lighting my sight
leaving cobble lane
hoisting staff to my purpose
snowy Mt. Fuji
daydream 's spell broken
doves cooing a Springtime aire
casting nature's spell
Rob Turner writes 06/19/98
Irony is this:
You get what you think you want,
Even though you don't.
in the bars of light
a caterpillar escapes
morning’s cold prison
Ruby writes 06/19/98
midsummer sunset
molten radiant promise of
awesome new day dawn
The poet comments, "Haiku to those who love sunset...to joy,hope and the human spirit."
Micah D. Fisher writes 06/18/98
Looking to the sky
Thinking of the days of old
Wishing to return
The poet comments, "We all can relate."
Marc S. writes 06/18/98
sleepless night -
thinking about
thinking about nothing
Star writes 06/17/98
Lonely puppy eyes
A best friend gone unnoticed
Human ignorance
Tiffany Collings writes 06/17/98
o brethren bird eat
so sorrowfully alone
while the others preen
The poet comments, "I've never found a more fulfilling way of expressing myself than through haiku."
David Hammond writes 06/17/98
Why do you hate me?
For my love for you is true.
Just as new blossoms.
Birds singing outside.
I find comfort, peace with them.
I am not alone.
The song of crickets
shatters the silence, but still.....
water smooth as glass
build you a picture
saying more while writing less
haiku essences
standing at crossroads
thought I could say so much more
a kiss imparts more
behold pale moon
at the left hand of darkness
sun opposite right
mountain through a plane
parallel now angular
under same blue skies
DeVar writes 06/16/98
never ending rain
seems students don't mind as much
the last week of school
classroom full of desks
separate from each other
final exam week
calling his lost mate
open wound against the sky
the cardinal waits
Anonymous writes 06/16/98
This cricket's purpose
To feed the starving spider
Ours--to be free
The poet comments, "I know it's cliche, but we really do take too much for granted.
"
Grey and brown cat sits
Among scattered shoes.
Ponders wearing none.
The poet comments, "My very first attempt at Haiku, had to look it up to find the rules!
I hope
it fits."
Mihajlo Mika Pavlovic writes 06/15/98
A Lent Lily
Yellow lightening
Firefly in the crow' s eye
spreads ash circle.
A Step
First step - morning twilight.
Second step - evening.
Gamble oflongshadows.
The Fountainhead
Eternal sun dial.
Quiet underground water:
digs the fountainhead.
Vid Vukasovic writes 06/15/98
Long sunset shadows
embrace the linden forest
with their fragrance
Anonymous writes 06/15/98
Storm's vengeance moves on
At the edge l see heaven
Hidden in clear skies
Boredom doom and gloom
Spending days with the boobtube
Rainy vacation
Kethry shares 06/14/98
I found a penny
On the ground; American.
Worth one point four cents.
The poet comments, "This was written by a friend of mine, and I thought it really true.
Oh, incidentally, I'm in Canada (which explains the last line)
"
Writing a poem
With seventeen syllables
Is very diffi
The poet comments, "This has been floating round the 'net, but it set me laughing so
I wanted to post it here.
"
The summer breeze blows,
The flower dances gaily,
Summer brings beauty.
MS. J writes 06/14/98
Nothing never more
Diluted by all of us
Create all of us
Tee Tyme writes 06/14/98
The sweet red roses
Were wet from the morning dew
Kissed me on the lips
Chelsei writes 06/13/98
The mountains are snowed,
the lake is so beautiful,
lovely nature's here.
Mother you're so sweet
your tenderness through my heart,
your hands are so warm
The poet comments, "I think Haiku poems are beautiful poems.
It's wonderful.
"
Look at the Blue Jay
Sitting on the window sill
nibbling peanuts.
Mother of Beauty
being so full of nature
Changing her seasons.
Summer is the heat
with animals enjoying,
basking in the sun.
Anonymous writes 06/13/98
Being able to
Pay all your debts is about
As good as it gets.
An eternity
Is obviously lacking
In paternity.
A sparsely furnished
Forest is thin on both trees
And picnic tables.
Aging isn't easy,
Especially when the old
Must learn from the young.
I appear to have
An information overload
On my learning curve.
A shot in the dark
May succeed. In which case it's
A flash in the pan.
Ragtag and bobtail
Went for a stroll and ended
Up the lumpenprole.
Events leading up
To the Second World War had
Happened once before.
And what, pray, did the
Brothers Montgolfier do
Other than balloon?
The major oeuvre
In the Louvre is, I think,
The Mona Lisa.
Aren't you proud of your
Heritage even though it
Doesn't merit it?
pout turns to wry smile
sun rises, another day
tea, then greet the day
day's dusky dawning
sun embracing shadowed land
Spring's cool clear morning
night's shadows return
hearth holds me in warm promise
Winter's cold footsteps
The poet comments, "this and the two previous poems are intended as a trilogy offering. "
LOWCOO writes 06/12/98
No ripple
In the old pond
Where's the frog?
The poet comments, "
Take off on classic haiku. Frogs are dying all over the world."
Star writes 06/11/98
Coincidences
Knowledge, insight and visions
We are all psychic
When dawn turns to dusk
A hidden life comes alive
Unseen to our eyes
The poet comments, "... but heard by our ears"
True beauty revealed
Nature's shimmering mirror
Reflections of life
Winter died today,
Now the Aloes often cry
And the willows wail
The poet comments, ""Curse this vile Summer""
DeVar writes 06/11/98
pelting drops of rain
force kids back into the school
reluctant scholars
Tiny, wiggly worms
toenails painted passion pink
first things to get cold
Ancho writes 06/11/98
sun rise on main street
sea gulls and bottle pickers
probe last night's garbage
Star writes 06/09/98
Beautiful feathers
Wings catching the April air
Spring shall bring them home
Hail! Jerry Springer
Fights, Nudity, Foul language
Talk show of today
The poet comments, "Who doesn't enjoy his nightly brawls? LOL...."
Summer's harmony
Songbird's soft, sweet melody
Beautiful music
Graceful black and white
Dramatic carefree prancing
Zebras play at dusk
The poet comments, "It's always the little things that get ya... inspired by a zebra Happy Meal toy on my desk"
Tiny symphony
A moonlit mid-summer song
The crickets' music
The poet comments, "Sometimes it's nice to hear something other than the radio =o)"
Leaves rustle in wind
Softly falling to the earth
Sign of fall's entrance.
Spring breezes return
Flowers blossom everywhere
Time for beginnings
Jararoop von Spitelsfeldt writes 06/09/98
I believe in toast.
It makes bread taste much nicer -
That is the reason.
The poet comments, "Perché?"
Gary Steinberg writes 06/09/98
life, death, transition
softening to this challenge
sunshine in transit
In still of morning
trees have forgotten the storm
layers of dukkha
The poet comments, "It is widely believed that the Buddha spoke a language called pali.
No single English word adequately captures the full depth, range, and subtlety of the crucial
Pali term dukkha. It is often translated as suffering, but is encompassed by stress, dis-ease,
disatisfaction. All pain both large and subtle are Dukkha."
Anonymous writes 06/08/98
little birdie fly
absolutely fabulous
fluttering of wings
rest, foot- sore pilgrim
look outward for glimpse of green
stretch, yawn, and relax
Dramsey writes 06/08/98
The river runs slow
The stones are hard on my feet
The water feels good.
ancient elevations
Incan warnings writ in stone
danger has found you
The poet comments, "For a friend who barely made it back from Peru.
R. Please rest, take your medicine, and get well."
garden growing well
in springs late blush blossoms bloom
birthing our fall crops
The poet comments, "
I recently rediscovered the joy of haiku. And will be using it again to write songs. Also will be sending in samples semi-regularly. would love to hear from anyone with comments concerning the art form."
Amidst greens of June,
the first saffron leaf stands out,
prophet of the fall
Mouths of ruined walls
sing of cities sunk in sand...
windy winding wails.
Rocks rock them to sleep
stark star-pierced night covers them,
knights of desert kings
The poet comments, "Ruins in the desert seem to host a ghostly life, especially at night."
laying on the beach
children watch cloud formations
one shouts...snowman!
always remember
the year of the waterbug
in a sheltered creek
what is all the fuss
el nino ever present
needing diaper change
DeVar writes 06/05/98
case of puppy love
and a puppy as a pet
you outlive them both
The poet comments, "A sad lesson my 15 year old daughter has had to learn."
hatchling's chirp for food
mother jay's random menu
happy to get it
early June's new chicks
the Easter-egg miracle
cycle is complete
The trees are shedding
Yellow leaves, Autumn and high
Time you looked at me.
The poet comments, "Fragile. Handle with care"
Hourglass writes 06/04/98
Sand blowing crossways,
underneath its followers -
time... it's running out.....
Dad, I have to pee
Should've gone before we left
No time for rest stops
Anita Carroll writes 06/03/98
The wind catches the balloon
Floating toward the summer sky and freedom
Striving to reach the sun
Dawn writes 06/03/98
Devotion's sweet release
Passion's child, Love's creation
A Father's heart beats
There's a rattlesnake
Coiled and ready to strike!
Guarding its domain.
The animals talk
but no one wants to listen
yearning to be free!
Pack horses loaded
Canteens filled with cool water
Blazing saddles ride
Daniel writes 06/02/98
Your silken soft hair;
Body and Soul: my Venus.
I'm in Love with you.
Harvested fields bare
The glory of your beauty
Every Autumn's day.
Nightmares by the sea
Everybody here wants you
The sky is a landfill
Away flies the bird
Cannot be seen but yet heard
Somewhere far away
For Lucy
Night-time, stellar skies
Are as your deep brown, big eyes -
Heaven's dark delight.
In the summer's breeze
Flowers flirt with trees
All thanks to the bees
The poet comments, "This is my first attempt, please bear with me..."
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