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Haiku Contest!

A Japanese Garden of Verse

Entries from September, 1997


Though on hiatus
During the month of August
We got many entries!

August's submissions
Will be found at the bottom
Of this month's contest.


Vinnie the Face writes 09/30/97

Gold Star! Can you please help me?
Where's the main gymnasium?
I'm late for Phys-Ed

John Mulder-The Netherlands writes 09/30/97

Gold Star! Suddenly she's there
a mixture of sun and rain.
The hazy rainbow

The fresh sea-air
suddenly disappeared
passing the fish-stall.

The poet comments, "see august"

The orange pumpkin
still in my kitchen-garden
in my soup tomorrow.

Low sun's altitude
on the nearly frozen lake
a large flock of ducks

On artificial-lawn
no players in wintertime
but snoozing sea-gulls

The poet comments, "atificial lawn, meant in dutch' Kunstgrassportveld'"

Jill Cline writes 09/27/97

Three dark six-point bucks
calmly munching gold soybeans
Do they fear the Fall?

MUSHTANG writes 09/26/97

She's dating that guy.
But she has more fun with me.
I don't understand.

The poet comments, "Being a 'friend' sucks. "

Teop-RA writes 09/26/97

Gold Star! Howling winter wind
I can hear your loneliness:
cold vacant doorway

laughter on the breeze
soaring painted paper kites:
final leaves of fall

December morning
seventeen die from the cold:
stock market heats up

The Convivial Codfish writes 09/24/97

Pink and white petals
Scattered in front of my door...
I sweep them away.

harvest moon eclipse
drunken men trying to work
a new telescope

Tavo writes 09/24/97

coffee on the road
behind the wheel headed east
toward a warm sunrise

John Sheirer writes 09/23/97

smiling teenager
with a deck of playing cards
takes my $20 bill

Gold Star! pills at dusk
my knee's throbbing
slowly fades

second-day yard sale
a $1 price tag stuck
to a clump of sod

Brian Loudon writes 09/23/97

Gold Star! a leaf slowly falls
and gazes back up into
the branch that was home

The poet comments, "my first haiku!"

Liana Robertshaw...Lanacane writes 09/22/97

My angel whispers
sounds of winter in my ear
Coldness fills the room

Summer comes today
All are happy; I am sad
My friend died today

Gold Star! Silently, we fall
In a pile of raked leaves
Laughing at the Fall

Jimbob writes 09/22/97

Gold Star! Is that a gray hair?
I was hoping it was blonde!
Welcome to autumn.

George writes 09/20/97

From a pebbled beach
beside a small woodland stream
two young boys skip stones.

A stray white cat stared
at me as if it knew me
from some former life.

Cock-a-doodle-do!
You can't set a rooster to
Daylight Saving Time

The PAPA! writes 09/19/97

Gold Star! Fall breezes are soft.
They caress barren tree limbs,
as birds wing southward.

The poet comments, "I was once married to a Japanese lady and also (after her) lived in Japan for 3 yrs. I have a whole lot of Haiku. Most is traditional."

Thomas Lanier writes 09/19/97

With time you must wait.
Eternity has no time,
And so, no waiting.

Misty writes 09/18/97

There's a storm moving
but Heaven's angels protect
mountains of beauty

George writes 09/17/97

Clouds play with the moon
A warm summer evening sighs
Young lovers embrace

Bite into an apple
Taste the warm sun of summer
On a winter's day.

Gold Star! From a cool deep well
Comes water which fell as snow
Before Greece burnt Troy.

Anonymous writes 09/17/97

A butterfly flies
It is beautiful and sad
She'll disappear again

The poet comments, "I'm only 14...not a professional :) "

PSY writes 09/17/97

Gold Star! A false woodgrain desk
Chalk dust rumbas in a ray
The clock moves so slow

Jill Cline writes 09/16/97

Gold Star! morning's red fireball-
burning early wisps of cloud
framed by black oak limbs

Mary Joan Monahan writes 09/16/97

Gold Star! Stepping so softly
That none can hear its coming
The fog envelops.

The poet comments, "Just for fun!"

Sunset is peaceful.
Sunrise is joy awakened
Time comes full circle.

Evaluator writes 09/16/97

The nest is empty.
It's time to fly south again.
And await next Spring.

Gold Star! Alas and foresooth
The candle burns so brightly.
BLAST! Both ends are lit!

The apparition.
Walking the long halls of time?
Mirror reflection!

Agustin Eastwood De Mello writes 09/15/97

Cypress tree bowing
paying homage to the earth
whereupon it grows

Gold Star! The little kitten
arrived at my kitchen door
my duty is clear

Master Daruma
guide me along my journey
over the mountains

MUSHTANG writes 09/15/97

Independence Day.
Labor day was just too short.
Hurry Thanksgiving!!!

The poet comments, "I wish we had a day off for Halloween too! "

George writes 09/15/97

A dust devil spins
Down the street scattering dust
And newly raked leaves.

Gold Star! Shards of cool spring rains
Shards of hot summer afternoons
The red leaves of fall.

Of ingratitude
It may be said, no "thank you"
Note need be written.

Ms.P writes 09/15/97

Scary thought, but true
Will out live us all in time
This life the cockroach

The poet comments, "What a train of thought huh? "

KPNewell writes 09/14/97

He called me a FREAK!
I'm gonna send him a kiss.
Because he's just cool...

The poet comments, "Hey you...You know who you are..."

Dawn is approaching...
Time to climb in the coffin.
Goodnight, dear vampires.

The poet comments, "Damn mortality!"

Mountains to valleys...
The path of life is made of.
Soar high...Come back down.

Gold Star! Time...Such a round clock.
Seasons circle around me.
Await their return.

Craig writes 09/14/97

Water bug striding-
silver shadows slip beneath,
over sunken leaves

Gold Star! Pinpoint pupils dart,
tensed in rushing terror-
fear becomes anger

Leans back, legs parted,
wanting his touch, she dreams-
happily contended

Gold Star! Ramshackle cabin
sits silent, trees embracing-
will she return - ever?

Mushtang writes 09/13/97

Gold Star! A beautiful day.
There's not a cloud in the sky.
Off to work I go.....

The poet comments, "What? Wait, no, that can't be right! "

Agustin Eastwood De Mello writes 09/13/97

Give me a small cell
and never turn on the light
I will find myself

Gold Star! The fading sunlight
presents much longer shadows
I feel very tall

Whitebird writes 09/12/97

Separate we are
But hearts that sing bring loving
Trust in the future

The poet comments, "For you Joey!"

George writes 09/11/97

Gold Star! The flushed face of the
Fall forest comes from drinking
Too much summer wine.

All gifts of the Gods
Are, like snow, first welcomed, then
Trampled underfoot.

---balas writes 09/11/97

Gold Star! Fine, soft, silky hair
it curls among my fingers
fragrance of walnuts

George writes 09/10/97

When age rules beauty
Tradition triumphs over
Simple good fortune.

When beauty rules age
A pretty face dismisses
Status quo ante.

Either way compels
Dame Wisdom and Lord Judgment
To beg for their bread.

JKH writes 09/10/97

digital slumber
drains virtual energy
but for autumn's eve

Omar K. writes 09/10/97

Candlelight crept with
silence into the creases
of the rumpled sheets.

I want to be near
trees, she says, her worn clothes full
of old lady smell.

Mike Morrish writes 09/10/97

moths dance around light
you see everything but here
the sound of the moon

Agustin Eastwood De Mello writes 09/09/97

Death arrived at night
without fanfare or warning
the game is over

Eric Sapp writes 09/09/97

rain washes droppings
from rock surface; air washes
the rain; rock is rock.

Gold Star! just the forest path
and the moon are with me now --
the path and the moon

Alyson Sugarman writes 09/09/97

Gold Star! Memories of you
Linger indefinitely
I love being loved.

White Bird writes 09/08/97

Resentment will grow
When words can not find their mark
Listen to yourself

Joshua H writes 09/08/97

circle over square
geometric perfection
known only by God

Joe Shoe writes 09/07/97

once ~ she said softly
a knight in shining armor
but now you're ground round

Wa Koo writes 09/07/97

fat ole frog
sitting on a lily pad
croaking through the night

Mushtang writes 09/07/97

Company picnic.
Forgot to bring my sun screen.
Got burned while skiing.

The poet comments, "Ow."

George writes 09/07/97

Where the sand beach ends
The wild grasses hold secrets
Only shore birds know.

Gold Star! The moon at his back
A small owl waits patiently
For a mouse to stir.

Do robins listen
to crows? or doves? Does anyone
listen to blue jays?

Jerry Reynolds writes 09/07/97

Wind chimes this morning
Silent as the icicles
Hanging from the eaves

Water marks
Staining the ceiling
Winter clouds

The poet comments, "I couldn't find anything about published poems being ineligible, so I'm sending this. "

Toast Point has no problem with published poems, as long as they are your published poems.

Footsie writes 09/06/97

Gold Star! An evening's anger
peppermint foot massage oil
not compatible

Mrelia writes 09/06/97

Happy, happy, joy
The August heat is over
New haiku stream forth

The poet comments, "I didn't know just how addicted I'd gotten to this page, reading everyone's haiku, and writing my own. "

Oh, no, Toast Point is an enabler...

George writes 09/06/97

On long winter nights
Foolish young lovers quarrel
Old lovers embrace.

Whose smile is sweeter
the sleepy just-suckled babe's
or its young mother's?

Gold Star! I need no robins
nor fields of bright daffodils;
I have grandchildren.

KPNewell writes a whole bunch 09/05/97

One sun's crystal glare
Ever so touching my soul
Thawing life's coldness.

The poet comments, "I haven't written a haiku since school! (Years ago). I constantly write poetry. Thanks for setting up this site. Very cool!"

Beautiful princess
We shall remember your stay
Within this cruel world.

The poet comments, "Dedicated to Princess Diana..."

Gold Star! Birth. Breath. Life. Love. Hate.
The stair-well in which we climb.
Regret? No...Lessons.

The poet comments, "Just unloading....."

Mushtang is so cool!
I visited his website.
Babette is THE dog!

The poet comments, "Hey! Just to say hello to Mushtang and Babette! "

Patience, Love, and Peace...
Cherish the life within you.
The outer...Moves on.

The poet comments, "That's it. Society's world..."

Blessings in disguise
Blindly seeking knowledge
True wisdom's within...

The poet comments, "--But that doesn't mean that everybody looks within to actually find it! Or maybe they just don't look deep enough..."

Confusion settles
Comfortably within my hands...
Always within grasp.

The poet comments, "Okay...Say comfortably with three syllables!! It's all the same!"

Gold Star! Life creates soul scars.
No soul can be purified.
'Till it sheds the flesh.

The poet comments, "If I only had more lines and Syllables to work with...Oh yeah! That's the whole point!!!"

George writes 09/03/97

Gold Star! Soft breezes ruffle
The moon's image in the lake.
Stronger ones steal it.

Gold Star! Even small breezes
cannot hide in the long arms
Of a willow tree.

Shirley Walker writes 09/02/97

Blistering fever
Race through my dusty desert
He is a cool drink

Gold Star! After funerals
Shrouded forms regenerate
Shedding silk cocoons

Phil Schorr writes 09/01/97

Secret Admirer

My lover of old,
Dancing in the falling leaves...
How I miss your touch.

The poet comments, "I wrote this long before visiting this web page, so please excuse the unintentional and entirely coincidental use of "falling leaves" as suggested in your introduction to Haiku. I wrote it shortly after my girlfriend of two years and I broke up... we tried to stay friends, but my emotions for her remained too stong (she broke up with me) and I couldn't handle being near her without being able to hold her close. "


August Entries

Since the contest was on hiatus, these entries have not been judged, but are presented here for your delecation and enjoyment.

Paula writes 07/24/97

Secrets whispered loom
If silent, the waves echo all
Footprints disapear

Reverend SKippy writes 07/24/97

Bitter are the wounds
but the best way to heal them
is to forget them

With unsettled mind
many words will not help you
Clarity is hush

The poet comments, "More of my work can be found at http://strops.computek.net/skippy/hiaku.htm"

MUSHTANG writes 08/02/97

Had date for dinner
Plane went to Albuquerque
She was in Ft Worth

The poet comments, "Mushtang had a dinner date with Kamaryn at the Dallas/FtWorth airport on my way to El Paso. Delta decided to route me thru Albuquerque at the last minute. Dammit."

R. Kenneth Pike writes 08/03/97

He was the walrus.
Never tried to hurt himself.
Yoko did not care.

Kimberly R. Langston writes 08/03/97

Bobbing truck bed ride
Pain white trees in a dark night
Ghost lights licking limbs

The poet comments, "One of those dreams I didn't quite come back from."

David Shytle writes 08/04/97

We are the people
The power is in our hands
We shall rule as one

The poet comments, "It is a shame we do not realize that we have the strength in numbers. Our voice, when united, can move worlds. "

Lepus Consort writes 08/04/97

dog days of stillness
sliceable humidity
sweat tickles downward

Agustin Eastwood De Mello writes 08/04/97

This inspiration
visits me when I shower
inconvenient

The poet comments, "As I rush to my computer to capture the moment - leaving a trail of wet footprints..."

Imagination writes 08/07/97

Imagination
Is found in nature and life
And all creation

The poet comments, "thanks for the page i liked it !!! jess"

Mary Ellen Walsh writes 08/09/97

like music it was
as the owl sliced the blue
eternity's chord

Brian J. Krummel writes 08/09/97

Fragile icicles
precariously dangle
shedding woeful tears.

Tripetalled children
frolic on earthen carpets,
racing towards summer.

Spiny fallen star
wades in retreating surf
for heavenly friends.

Leading towards the sea,
the pitted road is patched by
broken oyster shells.

Vince Caruso writes 08/13/97

Dark of red arc 'til
crescent of gold with melon.
Why does this have to?

Kim Kwang Ho writes 08/14/97

The sun is so warm
But she is cool like the moon
I am a poor star

Craig Jensen writes 08/14/97

Lord, when I see you
The moon's as hot as the sun
I think I'm in Love.

Oh Jong-hoon writes 08/14/97

I am crying now
on this Independence Day.
"Turn off the TV!"

Sang-Kyun Kim writes 08/14/97

The fall of Seoul
is nice, sunny, beautiful
Welcome to Seoul

Wa Koo writes 08/16/97

up way too early
forgot the trazedone
surf the internet

Ha-Vi Tran writes 08/16/97

Dark mystical night
Has an arising silence
Quiet and fearful

Dierdre Thomas writes 08/17/97

Tree frogs quiet
The creek's stones sit high and dry
All the children have gone.

Angela Bollilnger writes 08/18/97

The gum of a lie
Deflated bubble of trust
Stuck under my tongue

Day cracking open
Light crawling over the bed
Run night for cover

Bryan Carpenter writes 08/19/97

lawnmower accident
sadly, spews torn yellow
chrysanthemum's

an accident with
paper shredder-- the torn white
chrysanthemum haiku

Mrelia writes 08/21/97

Candlelit white silk
Smooth, soft folds pooled 'round her feet
After the wedding

The poet comments, "Hope you're having a great vacation!"

His eyes denim blue
Smiling, takes her quaking hand
And gives her his soul

The poet comments, "I was married in June, but couldn't find the right words at first."

White Bird writes 08/22/97

Its a time for change
Painful decisions are made
But tears will bring joy

Judith Gorgone writes 08/22/97

August moon rests low
porthole to the universe
thru indigo sky

The poet comments, "Thanks for a lovely site! Visit more of my haiku at Haiku Moon (as well as others!)."

Memories of you
fading, a mere gentle breeze
with seasons passing.

Baumer1 writes 08/22/97

trapped in dark alone
i fly toward the flame below
my wings now in flames

The poet comments, "Citronella candles attract at least some insects."

Sue Andres writes 08/23/97

silken flowers cream
soft swirls of deep rich earth
delicate and sweet

John Mulder, the Netherlands writes 08/24/97

The fresh sea-air
suddenly disappeared
passing the fish-stall

Suddenly she,s there
a mixture of sea and rain
The hazy rainbow.

Circle segments around
a bent-grass clump in the sand
painted by the wind

Monotonous sound
from a steady dripping tap
outside it's raining

Sunshine writes 08/25/97

Dussler, king of fish
casting, feeling, pulling trout
under summer skies

The poet comments, "love this site!"

Joshua H writes 08/25/97

sweet midnight waters
quench the parched and weary land ...
quick! close the windows!

Agustin Eastwood De Mello writes 08/26/97

Baby cat arrives
from my hot backyard jungle
late summer harvest

The poet comments, "Mother cat (Smokey) proudly presented her progeny for my inspection as she announced her asccomplishemnt with a fanfare of meows..."

Joshua H writes 08/26/97

cool autumn silence
swallows twilight's waning flame.
now the sound of rain.

Michael Sheinbaum writes 08/27/97

hop-frogs of summer
evade holy toad of death
choose when to croak.

The poet comments, "I'm not the *least* offended that you've omitted Haiku Headlines of the Day (http://www.coolwebsite.com/haiku/headline ... goodness, you haven't clicked yet?!) but hope you will stop by. Let me know if you'd like more from me. All the best,
Michael Sheinbaum
Managing Editor
Haiku Headlines of the Day
http://www.coolwebsite.com/haiku/headline"

Proud Papa writes 08/28/97

Yesterday full house.
Two married, one in Marines.
Woe the empty nest.

The poet comments, "Children grow too fast to ignore spending quality time with them. My daughters are married, my son leaves soon--he has joined the Marines; and YES, men can suffer from empty nest syndrome......."

Amaned writes 08/28/97

Heavy metal bass
Cries of the fallen angels
Through paper thin walls

George writes 08/28/97

Dry stalks are brown.
New stalks are pale green.
Old love is a necklace of pearls.

The poet comments, "I don't always hold to the 5-7-5 rule. Why? I write in ideomatic American English. Why not? Same answer."

The poet comments, "This is the first of four haiku-like verses which loosely translate a poem by Göethe which likens the souls of men to water. The rest follow."

The souls of human beings
Are like water
Welling up from the deep.

It rises and falls
Between the earth and the skies
Without ceasing

As a great cataract
Pounding and thrashing
It grinds boulders to sand

As the still surface of a lake
It clearly reflects
The distant stars

Dr. Prozac writes 08/29/97

Hail to the Marines!
First in, last out, none better!
Now my son is one!

The poet comments, "Sempre Fi to all those Leathernecks out there who have been, are in, or are getting ready to enter the USMC!!"

Divorced, still single.
Both my daughters wed & gone.
My son leaving soon.

The poet comments, "Alas I am but a single man who suffers from the throes of "Empty Nest Syndrome". NO, my son is NOT getting married: He has joined the USMC! Sempre Fi!"


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