Japanese

The
Toast Point
Haiku Contest!

A Japanese Garden of Verse

Entries from July, 1997


Major Ogilvie writes 08/02/97

Conceived in a tube
genetically selected
soulless perfection

Munen Muso writes 07/31/97

Gold Star! frustration abounds
my love no longer repressed
but still unquenched

The poet comments, "for Kerry..."

DJ Thomas writes 07/31/97

Rain falls on brown leaves
a young girl crosses the street
and turns the corner

Dennis writes 07/31/97

Wish for wondering
Not wandering all your days
welcome the changes

Joel Kugelmass writes 07/31/97

While putting shot
Athlete's foot roots in circle --
Summer pollen flies.

Michael Pollick writes 07/31/97

Darkness, and what stays
Falls too close to the heart- Poor
enough for beggars.

Entering wisdom
is the first sign of passion,
and love's last gamble.

Gandy dancers sing,
and iron is forced to obey
their undying song.

The poet comments, "I have only recently discovered the absolute pleasure of haiku form. Free verse is interesting in its own way, but the discipline required to form quality haiku is remarkable. I hope to learn more about the different forms in the coming years."

Kathy Grover writes 07/30/97

Gold Star! hot pain sears my heart,
the sultry night bakes my skin:
homeostasis

Lepus Consort writes 07/30/97

sticky summer night
pointy head invaders strike
hand smack squashed red

J.B. Troost writes 07/29/97

haze absorbs the sun
as the moon gets brighter
on this winding road

the fragrance of rain
falls on a darkening garden
and blends with its sounds

Ali Pharmakidis writes 07/29/97

Haiku for the Beloved

eyes hands hips minds locked
our love is pure like water
pleasures of our flesh

Thia writes 07/29/97

Gold Star! clustered bay leaves give
cooking odors. underneath:
the sharp smell of skunk

Joan Monahan writes 07/29/97

Time is flowing on
I am one with the river
My tide is life renewed.

I ask not of you
My love I give you freely.
You are my own life.

Gold Star! Like a new blossom
You unfold your spirit life
I nestle in your heart.

Eugene Orlando writes 07/29/97

Floating, sparkling star
Spites the nighttime gravity.
Fire in a fly.

The poet comments, "On seeing fireflys."

Kellie Hanna writes 07/28/97

Gold Star! Pressed close against breasts
Dewdrop skin, warm, hard, soft skin
Dances of the flesh...

Alan

Blue eyes that echo
Sweetness undefinable:
They sing your sad song

The poet comments, "I am a 24 year-old American writer, and have just begun writing haiku for the first time since grade school; I have recently begun to study its various forms, styles and linguistic elements, and have just this month published two (potato--yes! potato!) haiku. I live in Philadelphia, PA, and graduated from Temple University last year with a degree in English and Writing"

Toast Point was a Fluffian from 1987-94.

Lepus Consort writes 07/28/97

sun sets, bullfrogs sing
dirges atop lilly pads
dusk slips into night

Kathy Grover writes 07/27/97

Gold Star! the moon winks at me;
does he know something I don't?
I blow him a kiss

Ugetsu Horniaka writes 07/27/97

In late afternoon
one sunlit spot in a dim
room - a striped cat sleeps

Ugetsu Horniaka writes 07/27/97

hooded eyes - a hood's
soft-but-tough face, treacherous:
Mitchum is not dead

Gold Star! Knife poised, my surgeon
re-checks textbook diagram.
I scream - to deaf ears

Are you too lovely
or too loose, that they want you
dead, purple loosestrife?

Bradley Simon writes 07/26/97

Gold Star! Wicked advocate,
brewer of winters poison.
Pour me another.

Heaven15 writes 07/25/97

Leaves the color red
Beautiful shades of orange
What happened to green?

Beautiful flowers,
Birds chirping with the soft breeze,
And thunder appears.

Gold Star! Snow chasing the wind,
Waiting to find the right ground.
Kids have snowball fights.

Sassisch writes 07/25/97

mummified as art
it keeps its story secret
- driftwood in the sun

wisteria blooms
dangling mysteriously
above the trash can

Lepus Consort writes 07/24/97

Gold Star! high noon high desert
heat waves shimmer, blacktop bends
last gas next exit

Sassisch writes 07/24/97

summer sunday brunch
on a log boom a heron
lurking gracefully

The poet comments, "Written while having brunch with a view of the Ballard Locks in Seattle, USA,"

Gold Star! midsummer fiddles'
last tunes fading in the rain
yarrow down the way

The poet comments, "Written after a washed-out Midsommarfest near Polsbo, Washington, USA."

Reverend SKippy writes 07/24/97

Bitter are the wounds
but the best way to heal them
is to forget them

Gold Star! With unsettled mind
many words will not help you
Clarity is hush

Anger held me wrong
It was my only shackle
Letting go, I fly.

Joy must follow you
Compensation is second
Work Must Also Be Joy

Women are with you
You do not understand them
they like it that way.

The poet comments, "More of my work can be found on http://strops.computek.net/skippy/hiaku.htm"

Paula writes 07/24/97

Secrets whispered loom
If silent, the waves echo all
Footprints disappear

Carly Gaudry writes 07/20/97

Gold Star! A soft, sweet fall breeze
Softly fluttering through trees
Then slowly stopping.

Shin Po writes 07/20/97

At the zoo --
Which side of the bars
Are the ANIMALS on?

The poet comments, "I wrote this at Busch Gardens (Fla) after observing the stupid antics of the animals on MY side of the fence!"

Mary Ellen Walsh writes 07/19/97

three noisy cygnets
destined to be beautiful
but very ugly now

Whyte9ght writes 07/19/97

"Hootsmon, who goes there?"
Said the duck to the black swan
Filofax in hand

The poet comments, "I don't know how to spell "Hootsmon" It's supposed to be a British exclamation."

Richard Capella writes 07/19/97

Gold Star! tiny dust motes float
through a bright beam of sunlight.
sci-fi asteroids

Major Ogilvie writes 07/18/97

a chance encounter
Cunanan, Versaci, BANG
a man on the run

Toast Point doesn't think it was a chance encounter. Au, contraire.

Mushtang writes 07/18/97

My puppy got spayed.
Now SHE'll never have puppies.
Bob Barker said to.

Anonymous writes 07/18/97

In love, there is death
Freedom dies in deepest love
Writer, where is life?

The poet comments, "Life is renewed in lost love Emotions, again, run free "

Broderick AR Jones writes 07/18/97

Curse this vile Summer
Which took you from your lover
This cried the lilies

Jill Cline writes 07/18/97

Gold Star! white onyx warrior
leading cloud troops through dark skies
summer thunderhead...

Mushtang writes 07/17/97

Puppy stayed with friend
She thought green paint can was toy
I'll call her "Green Butt"

The poet comments, "My poor puppy Babette. She didn't know. Heh heh heh"

Rico writes 07/17/97

Gold Star! In summer's oven
I miss the kiss of spring rain
Much as I miss you

Anonymous writes 07/17/97

Waves crash to the shore
The sun sets in the ocean
My footprints are gone

Mark Balas writes 07/17/97

Bright summer full moon.
Some soft sweetness on my lips:
I'm kissing your chin

Agustin Eastwood De Mello writes 07/16/97

This foggy morning
clouds the ocean horizon
my thoughts search inside

Garry Morse writes 07/16/97

Simple seduction
Is endless unwashed masses.
You're impossible!

The poet comments, "On becoming a trivial but popular political figure yet still failing to win over the one woman who mattered... "

Gold Star! Eloquent I'm called
Except in your sweet company
And silent beauty.

The poet comments, "About a beautiful woman saying I was eloquent, thus making me speechless."

Gold Star! Patterns surface in
Universal fabric if
We see them or not.

The poet comments, "I see what is meant to be. My true love does not."

Were I Narcissus,
You're my reflecting river.
Look away? Never!

The poet comments, "The most egotistical man ever known falls in love."

Gold Star! I am an island,
Bottled thoughts tossed toward you,
Smashing on your shores.

The poet comments, "On revealing my great love to my darling in an immense work of epic verse."

Let parallel peaks
Meet in a valley as one
Of shared lows and highs.

The poet comments, "Concerning uniting with my love, our respective ages, and corresponding appetites."

From this darkling plain,
Fear not our jagged journey
Into the unknown.

The poet comments, "My invitation of a new life for my love who said she would be waiting upon a darkling plain for me."

Whatever terrain
We find aloft or below,
Love will see us through.

The poet comments, "It does not matter what my love and I will face. We will be together and that is enough."

Across crowded rooms,
Your shimmering azure eyes
Shone above hundreds.

The poet comments, "On rallying many people over time and how my love stood out, as if her eyes glowed naturally like that of Goddess Athene during an assembly in the Iliad. A visitation by loveliness!"

Robert R. Cobb writes 07/15/97

Imagination
seeking reality finds
some dreams can come true.

Extrapolating
known values, numerically,
assumes the unknown.

Quantifying
data statistically
proclaims evidence.

Colonization
expands universal truths
making us feel small.

Apiary hives
illustrate existing plans
assuring our space.

The poet comments, "Other poetry by Robert R. Cobb may be found in recent issues of SNAKESKIN Webzine, Basket Case Magazine, The Nexus, Paradigm Press Magazine, The Southern Ocean Review, Cuisenart, and BeFreeZine. Please direct reader's comments to: rrcarts@prodigy.net"

William Lee Hampton writes 07/15/97

Occupational Hazard

Gold Star! Alas, two bad knees!
That's what comes of majoring
in Theology.

Richard Capella writes 07/15/97

unbelievable
today, heat to fry an egg
then all too soon, snow

wee wren stares at me
she warns me, "no closer, please"
"my life for my young"

copper sun rises
haze-filled valleys gape in light
scorching summer day

Ancient 1 writes 07/15/97

spokes without a hub
a center long forgotten
wilted petals mourn

Renee Galen writes 07/15/97

Under night's blue veil
Sounds of leaves and waters
and my heart's rhythm

Cherry blossom snow
falls gently on my spirit
as your love's whisper

Dee Berry writes 07/15/97

Love is wonderful
Dancing visions in your head
Love can often burn

Broderick AR Jones writes 07/14/97

Summer mountain still
Hawks swoop and sore through clear sky
From above He smiles

The poet comments, "Hawk Mt. Ranger School Alpha Squadron Commander 8 JUL 97"

Gabe Asher writes 07/13/97

Dogs bark late at night.
Just what are they barking at?
HEY!!!! SHUT THE HELL UP!

Dr. Frustrated writes 07/12/97

Gold Star! Waiting room is full.
Patients sitting for two hours.
Twelve! It's time for lunch!

The poet comments, "Wait a little longer, fools!"

Thony writes 07/12/97

Stuff is pretty cool
And food is good for eating
And things are cool too

David Payne, Jr. writes 07/12/97

Snow spirals on chill
black wind. Skeleton branches
scratch the spinning sky.

Gold Star! Smoldering sun spits
hateful razors of heat while
rainbows arch like joy.

Lepus Consort writes 07/11/97

Gold Star! helpless I tumble
foamy monster engulfs all
salty sand runs cold

Julie R. Bryan writes 07/10/97

Alone on the road
Fireflies, but no fire
For this old man's pipe.

Gold Star! Hail to the Sun God.
Worshipping youth lie baking.
Cancer cells simmer.

The poet comments, "Any and all criticism welcome. I'm thick skinned."

A wounded wing lies
Dangling out over the eaves.
Shot by a child.

The poet comments, "Who said, "Children can be so cruel."?"

Mushtang writes 07/09/97

There are haiku rules.
You just count the syllables.
So how come some people don't put in the right number?

The poet comments, "Uh... oops."

TM Alper writes 07/09/97

The URL's good!
After two years, you're still here
counting syllables!

Gold Star! Epiphany strikes!
My brain reels! I see, I SENSE:
shoot, it won't fit here.

Toast Point apologizes to TMA for not getting in touch with him when he and Wumpus were in the Bay Area over Memorial Day.

Katrina Abigail Blair writes 07/09/97

Voices chattered
purple flowers
blossomed

Yeats writes 07/09/97

Switch between sites
Of Adult and Haiku Ah
Cream with hot peanut

The poet comments, "Try!"

Toast Point looks bemusedly at the poet, then shudders a bit.

Kamaryn writes 07/09/97

Hugging her finger
From a bubble gum machine
A beautiful love

Dr. Frustrated writes 07/08/97

What, no appointment?
You need to be seen RIGHT NOW!!!?...
Back of the line, jerk!

The poet comments, "We run a doctor's office, not a bakery."

Dammit, Jim, I'm a doctor, not a baker!

Mrelia writes 07/08/97

Gold Star! Sky-high firework smoke
Drifting in warm summer air
Gold star afterglow

David Wood writes 07/07/97

swirling clouds of white
carrying hope-filled wishes
seeds fly heavenward

right hand in prayer
left in humble bestowal
whirling dervish dance

sleepy-eyed prayers
bedtime stories unending
please tell it again

Phyllis Lanser writes 07/07/97

Red dog lies panting
Sun relentlessly blazing
July in the South

The poet comments, "The dog and I are from the North, but we are getting used to the heat - slowly. "

Toast Point's parents retired to Beaufort, SC a few years ago, and we do not visit them in the summer.

Amanda writes 07/06/97

sunlit skies sparkle
As the trees dance to autumn's
sun-kissed melody

Butterflies writes 07/06/97

Soaring off the ground
Higher than the highest tree
Touching the Heavens

The poet comments, "Please let me know about future contests"

Toast Point responds, "Our contests run continuously!"

LynneDepp writes 07/06/97

The butterfly flies,
begining its long journey
swiftly with the wind.

Mrelia writes 07/05/97

Gold Star! Alone in bathroom
Drops, one, two three in the vial
Is he a daddy?

The haiku poem
Brilliant shards of human thought
Crystal ball visions

Jill Cline writes 07/05/97

Gold Star! River reflects sky
We glide by secret green banks,
canoeing through clouds.

Agustin Eastwood De Mello writes 07/05/97

Gold Star! See the platypus
the identity crisis
is quite obvious

Moonchilde writes 07/05/97

Tourists mob the beach,
Window shopping the Boardwalk --
Penny millionaires

The poet comments, "I always welcome comments/criticisms. Thanks for the forum!"

Gold Star!

Dick Covanova writes 07/04/97

Dreaming eyes sparkle
Smiling with her tongue and teeth
Butterfly flutter

Pavol Kukucka, jr. writes 07/04/97

Mirage in thy eye
She is somewhere overthere
`li `li tell me why.

Caligula writes 07/03/97

Blacksmith's fire burns
Horses with frogs on worn hooves
Adidas on steeds

The poet comments, "Haiku onegaishimasu. Dozo, Dozo. "

Mushtang writes 07/03/97

We finally met.
Life will never be the same.
I have seen heaven.

The poet comments, "When you see a girl as beautiful as Kamaryn, nothing will ever be the same. "

Caligula55 writes 07/03/97

movement of your choice
piano reverberates
earth is rotating

The poet comments, "I am all about the jewelry "

Ummm...the fish barks at midnight...

blond on blond iris
set ablaze and raise the roof
dearth of minor kings

The poet comments, "I am from Scrubbrush Texas, 30 miles outside of Howlinwind "

Former Jock writes 07/03/97

Gold Star! On the football field . . .
Uh oh--forgot my jock strap
CRUNCH! Cannot have kids

Mrelia writes 07/03/97

Gold Star! Molten golden air
Strumming the dragonfly wing
Over cool water

Kamaryn writes 07/02/97

Blue convertibles
Cran-apple is for losers
Antibiotics

The poet comments, "Ode to the Mush-man"

Richard Capella writes 07/02/97

caterpillar walks.
flowing river of motion.
synchronicity

Major Ogilvie writes 07/02/97

Crumpets and tea please
Brits keep a stiff upper lip
Hong Kong is long gone

Lepus Consort writes 07/02/97

Gold Star! penny for your thoughts
reach down deep, let it all out
catharsis ain't cheap

mind fixed on thoughts
memory recalls nothing
white paper stares back

Broderick AR Jones writes 07/01/97

The cloud toots its lips
It blows a bone-chilling breeze
Then moves swiftly on

Sex

The monster came and
Took her, she felt,"He's not man
Enough to save me"

Ha, Mister Oak, I've
Been picking daisies, please don't
Tell the begonias


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