sweat rolls down her cheek
too hot in this room, this bed
I just move closer
the last thing, her jeans
I hang them out on the line
as she requested
almost like a dream
a cool night, under the stars
playing in the grass
The poet comments, "Is this hackneyed imagery ?"
Well, the Sage likes it.
a sleepy lagoon
rocked by thunder and lightning
frog conference ends
sudden spring cloudburst
drenches joggers to the core
they skip on in bliss
hi, robin red breast
joyfull in the summer rain
plethora of worms
Hating morning mists
For illuminating webs
Are hungry spiders.
Securely hidden,
An ornery cricket chirps louder
The nearer I get!
The poet comments, "multiple puns intended. For those who didn't get the jargon, explanation available on query."
slow-moving river
flows over varnished pebbles
nymphs dance in the breeze
our warm bodies
nestled closely under a quilt -
watching television
The poet comments, "2 am - nothing better to do than write haikus and wait for the next earthquake"
fire fuck she calls it -
we wonder if neighbors heard
our three year old child
Toast Point is reminded of a story told to him by a friend, of her child at the same age. After viewing a large branch (big stick) blown down by the storm, she went running up to the local meter man happily yelling, "Big dick! Big dick!".
Jimmy Buffet blaring
loudly from Uncle Mike's stereo
he can't drive us away
holding hands with you
while snow crackles under our feet
warms my heart and soul
sunlight streaming through
a stained glass kitchen window
reminds me of you
afternoon sunlight
warming our naked bodies
on cool cotton sheets
creaking old porch swing
facing west towards blue ocean -
brilliant red sunset
a summer picnic
fried chicken from Safeway
dancing in the grass
the feel of smooth legs
gliding across silken sheets -
anticipation
The poet comments, "just broke up with my girlfriend of three years and am looking for a way to keep my mind off of other things besides killing myself. If you're reading this, I guess it's working. Most of the poems are about her. I guess you could call that therapeutic."
Toast Point welcomes the poet to the Haiku House of Healing.
The poet comments, "(duende: demon spirit of inspiration - demanding to be heard and felt)"
The poet comments, "When I was a child, the golden reflection was supposed to signify that the target child liked butter. Of course, everybody did."
Bright salamandrian
Ambergris-hued avatar
leaps from age to age
Sitting crosslegged
This world overwhelms me so
Tearful april morn
Unguarded silence
The harvest moon devours us
Emancipation!
brilliant orange
California poppies
concentrate sunshine
The poet comments, "I thought of this one while driving down a country road, when suddenly the sky seemed bright, like near the ocean. Then I saw a large bank of brilliant California poppies."
The poet comments, " i wrote this poem on the spot. hope ya like it cause i'v never really done haiku before. *smile* may your god(s) or goddess(s) always walk with you."
Toast Point sighs. "That's so sweet!"
when I speak to you
i never use phatic words
nor hear them of you
almost frostbite cold
when we put you in the ground
I saw that spring's robin
The poet comments, "O sage! a comment on these scratchings?"
The Sage replies, "These are very thought-provoking - emotionally resonant, but not obvious. Interesting."
again I stumble
bruised and battered I rise
a new day awaits
sun breaths daylight
moon, night sun, breaths night light
lovers breath, starlight
The poet comments, "I like this one, waddya think?"
The Sage thinks it's pretty, but the pairings are a little forced.
beautiful bluebird
sings from his new nesting box
avian rapture
spring snow melts away
I espy small white mushrooms
oops. Long-lost golf balls
pine needles, cushioned earth
deep in the concrete jungle
fresh scents, soft footsteps
The poet comments, "Are any left in the Big Apple?"
Yes, but you have to hunt for them...in Central Park!
on the verandah -
raindrops splatter, thunder rolls
distant lightning flares
The poet comments, "Did I read something like this before? Let's face it, there's very little new under the sun."
pale purple violets
piercing oak-lined, leaf-mulched trails
spring's shy harbingers
The poet comments, "Hai everyone! If you publish me with a star, I get extra credit in my creative writing class, don't let me down!"
The Sage is immune to pleas, but liked the haiku anyway.
The poet comments,
"I am not so good
foreign translations of love
good night wife"
The poet comments, "I thought I would send this in for fun. It is the only one I have ever written. I wrote it for an 8th grade assignment."
Wings of butterfly
flying free and peacefully
seeing all nature
Stars in the sunshine
The moon under a rainbow
The wonders of God
Menacing blackness
Lightning flash and thunder crash
Earth says a prayer
hubby's birthday here
time to reflect on one's life
passing too quickly
the froggies croaking
signal their presence in spring
melodies of love
Ah, but the writer chooses to adopt the constraints, or not!
The poet comments, "Powerful emotions evoke haiku writing. It's not always pretty. Sorry."
Clever!
The poet comments, "Thanks Joey!"
wife sits quietly
reading. forty years of us.
I dearly love her.
fallen angel mourns
wings folded in atrophy
the sky forgotten
clinging to the dust
I stumble towards heaven
blinded by the glow
At my job
WHO stops the clock
When I'm not looking???
The poet comments, "The Agony & the Ecstacy! "
roof rattling rain,
thunder, lightening flashed wind-whipped trees;
go back to sleep, son.
gray dawn's warm embers,
ghosts of last night's fire spirits;
my soul sleeps with them.
red evening fire,
sun sets on another day;
I'll have dessert now!
Lovina Sutton
beneath the cold gray marble.
Gone one hundred years.
mendacity. it
is as nothing , when compared
to reality
The poet comments, " I am deeply indebted to my friend Wa Koo for introducing me to Web TV this rainy afternoon. I touch my forehead to the floor to all haijin in the Lotus Land."
Red Emperor shoots--
hey, these are not deer lettuce!
Bambi, watch your rear.
saint in yellow robes
holds the lemon to his lips,
smiling without care
What is this folly?
They called for light rain today.
Four inches of snow?
The poet comments, "Hale-Bopp is slowing down....how do I know? There are 39 passengers on board!"
sparkling diamonds coil
beak and feathers thrust and whirl
in a dance of death
courageous sparrows
teeter at flight's first summons
leaping into life
Yes, in a sense...
The poet comments, "And nevermind the elusive gold star. This is MY truth!"
Ashen remembrance
Turns to moist dew; soulless lips
Just in spite of you.
anole, spider
competing for the same spot;
mother nature wins.
Eternity here
Amid the fragrant past of
Japanese bamboo.
Early plum blossoms
Do not smile too much at me
Your brightness is spring.
Hale-Bopp-ity bop
My bunnies hippity hop
Past bright winkie stars.
The poet comments, " alt. 3rd line: How it came about."
Sometimes the explanation is nice and helpful, sometimes it isn't...
The poet comments, ""My grandpa, he's 95; he keeps on dancin', he's still alive...""
I listen to songs
I had almost forgotten -
Rediscovering.
The poet comments, "The bands my parents, siblings, and I grew up with share space in the CD player, running on random."
Life without music
Is like life without eating
And living as easy.
The poet comments, "Perhaps I exaggerate my point; but probably not."
behind the comet
they sought a stronger life force
but Jesus is here....
The poet comments, "Written after viewing the Hale-Bopp comet for the first time. I welcome comments and criticism, as always."
doctor's smiling face
"I have some wonderful news"
tears in both our eyes
luna moth captured
by wide net of outdoor light
light off, victim free
Was April 3rd 'moth day'? (see below)
The poet comments, "The first time I saw Anne Marie.."
cricket's song of love
heralding summer romance
keeps me wide awake
bright armored columns
soldiers dressed in red and black
the ants march to war
stone buddha garden
rocks amid wavy sand rows;
stop building there, ants!
it doesn't last long
this soft, late afternoon glow;
chill ushers in fall.
barren trees slumber
surrendering completely
to winter's embrace
swathed in mud and silt
frogs hibernate in silence
dreaming of spring rain