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A Japanese Garden of Verse

Entries from April, 1997


Wa Koo writes 05/01/97

Gold Star! e-mail from a friend
warms the cockles of the heart
why you do not write?

Shin Po writes 04/30/97

Flowers on the graves --
Such a shame
No one smells them.

Richard Capella writes 04/29/97

April showers bring
May flowers which in turn bring
beauty to behold

Bryan Carpenter writes 04/29/97

my girl goes outside
she says, "come on, join me, its nice"
air makes her sneeze

sweat rolls down her cheek
too hot in this room, this bed
I just move closer

Gold Star! the last thing, her jeans
I hang them out on the line
as she requested

almost like a dream
a cool night, under the stars
playing in the grass

Kumaramurthy Sivaramakrishnan writes 04/29/97

Gold Star! Invisible peasant,
Reaps a harvest of stars using,
His sickle moon.

The poet comments, "Is this hackneyed imagery ?"

Well, the Sage likes it.

Joe Shoe writes 04/29/97

sudden spring shower
surprises in the garden
umm - fresh earth smell

a sleepy lagoon
rocked by thunder and lightning
frog conference ends

sudden spring cloudburst
drenches joggers to the core
they skip on in bliss

hi, robin red breast
joyfull in the summer rain
plethora of worms

Ron writes 04/28/97

Gold Star! Stretched by a robin,
An unfortunate earthworm
Lost its tug-of-war.

Hating morning mists
For illuminating webs
Are hungry spiders.

Securely hidden,
An ornery cricket chirps louder
The nearer I get!

Erin Hagenow writes 04/28/97

Sun filtering down
cartops show through old snow crust
I won't be fooled

Kumaramurthy Sivaramakrishnan writes 04/28/97

Gold Star! Lawyer surveying,
Asks Rose "Get me the printout,
In Legal Landscape"

The poet comments, "multiple puns intended. For those who didn't get the jargon, explanation available on query."

Nadya writes 04/28/97

If the Sun were red,
If you were young
Then... Then... Then...

Kathy Grover writes 04/27/97

rain kisses the soil
touch quenches a thirsty soul
now blossoms can grow

Wa Koo writes 04/27/97

Gold Star! Oh! Dogwood Blossoms
fading - strewn along the path
do they have to go?

Bryan Carpenter writes 04/27/97

I drift away from
the porch light--it is dark there
it is not near her

Sleepless in Los Angeles writes 04/27/97

Gold Star! chilling gust of wind
snaps brittle limbs in old growth
snow blankets their fall

slow-moving river
flows over varnished pebbles
nymphs dance in the breeze

our warm bodies
nestled closely under a quilt -
watching television

The poet comments, "2 am - nothing better to do than write haikus and wait for the next earthquake"

fire fuck she calls it -
we wonder if neighbors heard
our three year old child

Toast Point is reminded of a story told to him by a friend, of her child at the same age. After viewing a large branch (big stick) blown down by the storm, she went running up to the local meter man happily yelling, "Big dick! Big dick!".

D. W. Burt writes 04/27/97

Gold Star! wet hair cascades
loosely over her open bathrobe
she draws me in

Jimmy Buffet blaring
loudly from Uncle Mike's stereo
he can't drive us away

holding hands with you
while snow crackles under our feet
warms my heart and soul

sunlight streaming through
a stained glass kitchen window
reminds me of you

afternoon sunlight
warming our naked bodies
on cool cotton sheets

creaking old porch swing
facing west towards blue ocean -
brilliant red sunset

a summer picnic
fried chicken from Safeway
dancing in the grass

Gold Star! the feel of smooth legs
gliding across silken sheets -
anticipation

The poet comments, "just broke up with my girlfriend of three years and am looking for a way to keep my mind off of other things besides killing myself. If you're reading this, I guess it's working. Most of the poems are about her. I guess you could call that therapeutic."

Toast Point welcomes the poet to the Haiku House of Healing.

Agustin Eastwood De Mello writes 04/26/97

Gold Star! Soul of the Gypsies
mystic spirit of deep song
duende Flamenco

The poet comments, "(duende: demon spirit of inspiration - demanding to be heard and felt)"

Cori writes 04/26/97

Gold Star! morning after birth
watching her sleep in sunlight
ah - small hands, fingers

Thor writes 04/26/97

frozen apple bud
only promised a spring birth
patiently waiting

Monique de Plume writes 04/26/97

a plucked buttercup
focuses a golden glow
on the small girl's face.

The poet comments, "When I was a child, the golden reflection was supposed to signify that the target child liked butter. Of course, everybody did."

Cam writes 04/26/97

Gold Star! Old cat's watchful eyes
view the dance of flurried leaves
A chill in the air

Bright salamandrian
Ambergris-hued avatar
leaps from age to age

Gold Star! Sitting crosslegged
This world overwhelms me so
Tearful april morn

Unguarded silence
The harvest moon devours us
Emancipation!

Yuri writes 04/25/97

Gold Star! Sad sighs of parting.
But when away you hurry
Your feet are dancing...

Monique de Plume writes 04/25/97

deep in the jungle
a lovely orchid blooms
and dies unseen.

brilliant orange
California poppies
concentrate sunshine

The poet comments, "I thought of this one while driving down a country road, when suddenly the sky seemed bright, like near the ocean. Then I saw a large bank of brilliant California poppies."

kraSIveya writes 04/25/97

Gold Star! The bright day darkens
as Sky donnes the shadowd cloak
of black night and stars

The poet comments, " i wrote this poem on the spot. hope ya like it cause i'v never really done haiku before. *smile* may your god(s) or goddess(s) always walk with you."

Toast Point sighs. "That's so sweet!"

Jeremy Johansen writes 04/25/97

Glimmering curtains,
dancing in the cold night sky-
the Aurora show.

Thor writes 04/25/97

to know my same shame
you must silence your accent
greeting a stranger

when I speak to you
i never use phatic words
nor hear them of you

Gold Star! almost frostbite cold
when we put you in the ground
I saw that spring's robin

The poet comments, "O sage! a comment on these scratchings?"

The Sage replies, "These are very thought-provoking - emotionally resonant, but not obvious. Interesting."

again I stumble
bruised and battered I rise
a new day awaits

sun breaths daylight
moon, night sun, breaths night light
lovers breath, starlight

The poet comments, "I like this one, waddya think?"

The Sage thinks it's pretty, but the pairings are a little forced.

Richard Capella writes 04/24/97

woman, Great Dane walk
as they walk, it's hard to tell
just who is walking whom

David Perkins writes 04/23/97

Gold Star! soft April sunshine,
filtered through the soul of God;
wake up, sleepy cat!

Plasticwrap writes 04/23/97

A single shell lies
On the warm, gritty beach shore
As the waves slap it.

Gerbo writes 04/22/97

what's under this rock?
ohmygodadozenbugs!
running for their lives!

Kumaramurthy Sivaramakrishnan writes 04/22/97

A WalMart in March,
Brutus and Caesar dance
The touring band "U2".

Clown, Banana & Haiku, Part Two

"Banana split?" he implores,
Then feigns choking on a scoop,
Spectators are in splits.

Costly Exchanges

"What is your price!",
"I am not for sale, never",
"Will cost you dearly!"

Richard Capella writes 04/22/97

paws click on the floor
I wake to familiar sound
just a dream; she's gone

beautiful bluebird
sings from his new nesting box
avian rapture

Gold Star! spring snow melts away
I espy small white mushrooms
oops. Long-lost golf balls

Monique de Plume writes 04/21/97

mauve and purple hills
layered over each other
a tissue collage

Gold Star! pine needles, cushioned earth
deep in the concrete jungle
fresh scents, soft footsteps

The poet comments, "Are any left in the Big Apple?"

Yes, but you have to hunt for them...in Central Park!

on the verandah -
raindrops splatter, thunder rolls
distant lightning flares

The poet comments, "Did I read something like this before? Let's face it, there's very little new under the sun."

Jill Cline writes 04/22/97

at the field's corner
springstruck does leap barb wire fences
freedom's graceful arc.

Gold Star! pale purple violets
piercing oak-lined, leaf-mulched trails
spring's shy harbingers

Tim Gesner writes 04/21/97

Gold Star! Clouds linger darkly
Only the first spring flowers
Bring back the sunshine

The poet comments, "Hai everyone! If you publish me with a star, I get extra credit in my creative writing class, don't let me down!"

The Sage is immune to pleas, but liked the haiku anyway.

High Haiku Guy writes 04/21/97

Ich bin nicht so gut
foreign translations of love
Bonne nuit une e'pouse

The poet comments,
"I am not so good
foreign translations of love
good night wife"

Thor writes 04/19/97

Gold Star! sure to glow to death
red-hot sparks escape the flame
the price of freedom

Richard Capella writes 04/19/97

Gold Star! spring, but more snow falls
birds look confused, as if to say
"we came north for this?"

Nicole E. Carter writes 04/19/97

Don't squander your time
Spend no hour on one wrong
Life on earth is brief

The poet comments, "I thought I would send this in for fun. It is the only one I have ever written. I wrote it for an 8th grade assignment."

Jeremy Resnick writes 04/19/97

Gold Star! Army of daisies
Descending over a hill
Fighting back winter

Gerbo writes 04/19/97

Gold Star! lettuce pray my friends
the rain does not wash the seeds
from our new garden

Cathleen J. Jones writes 04/19/97

Children jumping on
red, brown and golden leaves
beauty can be fun.

Wings of butterfly
flying free and peacefully
seeing all nature

Gold Star! Stars in the sunshine
The moon under a rainbow
The wonders of God

Lepus Consort writes 04/18/97

pitch black evening
arrow drawn, I shoot the moon
it falls on my soul

Menacing blackness
Lightning flash and thunder crash
Earth says a prayer

Felicidad writes 04/17/97

whispers at nightfall
every thing is in order
day breaks eternal

hubby's birthday here
time to reflect on one's life
passing too quickly

Gold Star! the froggies croaking
signal their presence in spring
melodies of love

Bryan Carpenter writes 04/17/97

Gold Star! being constrained
by nature, form, language
it doesn't add up

Ah, but the writer chooses to adopt the constraints, or not!

Cybergal writes 04/17/97

put down your guitar
i don't want to listen now
your music has died

Kathy Grover writes 04/17/97

Like a slimy leach,
jealousy sucks out all peace,
leaves a bleeding wound.

The poet comments, "Powerful emotions evoke haiku writing. It's not always pretty. Sorry."

Kumaramurthy Sivaramakrishnan writes 04/17/97

"Laugh!" the clown appeals,
As he slips over banana peels,
Peals of laughter erupt.

Clever!

Ancient 1 writes 04/17/97

Gold Star! harvest completed
scarecrows guard the empty fields
ever vigilant

Mary O'Reilly writes 04/16/97

golden drop atop green stem
unfurls its glory
in pale spring light

Al Baum writes 04/15/97

Gold Star! Earth sky earth sky earth
Spring spins them quickly into one
rolling down a hill

Nature vs. Life writes 04/15/97

The river flows through
The valley, like blood flows through
The chambers of the heart.

Bunny Queen writes 04/15/97

Gold Star! Trust in the loving
Shall always reap the reward
of more love to come

The poet comments, "Thanks Joey!"

R. Barrington writes 04/14/97

A grasshopper jumps
Many years later he lands
And it is still spring

Richard Capella writes 04/14/97

ladybug crawling
on my keyboard. scary thought:
next intelligence?

wife sits quietly
reading. forty years of us.
I dearly love her.

Steven Lowik writes 04/14/97

All that I want
is to spend a lifetime with you
and eternity

David Wood writes 04/14/97

morning's welcome kiss
gleams from distant horizons
sunflowers awake

fallen angel mourns
wings folded in atrophy
the sky forgotten

clinging to the dust
I stumble towards heaven
blinded by the glow

Niaz Ashrelle writes 04/13/97

The Mushroom

Unusual one
Covered with the dirty spots
sitting by the tree

Shin Po writes 04/13/97

FAXs, PCs, telephones
Don't exist --
Ahhh, Vacation!

Gold Star! At my job
WHO stops the clock
When I'm not looking???

The poet comments, "The Agony & the Ecstacy! "

David Perkins writes 04/12/97

Gold Star! good or bad for me,
this wine, loaf of bread and thou?
the taste says it all!

roof rattling rain,
thunder, lightening flashed wind-whipped trees;
go back to sleep, son.

gray dawn's warm embers,
ghosts of last night's fire spirits;
my soul sleeps with them.

red evening fire,
sun sets on another day;
I'll have dessert now!

Jill Cline writes 04/12/97

pointed white steeple
piercing heaven's clear blue sky
little country church.

Gold Star! Lovina Sutton
beneath the cold gray marble.
Gone one hundred years.

Richard Capella writes 04/12/97

frigid winter eve
old house creaks and groans as things
go bump in the night

Ashley Lynn Dyer writes 04/12/97

Look up in the sky
You can see clouds drifting by
Look up in the sky

Richard Capella writes 04/11/97

Gold Star! look at her old chair
shadows play and make it seem
as if she's still there

mendacity. it
is as nothing , when compared
to reality

Monica writes 04/11/97

Look in the night sky.
There is a beautiful light.
The comet so great.

Howard Lee Kilby writes 04/11/97

Gold Star! samisen silence
above the hot springs
cherry blossoms

The poet comments, " I am deeply indebted to my friend Wa Koo for introducing me to Web TV this rainy afternoon. I touch my forehead to the floor to all haijin in the Lotus Land."

Kathy Grover writes 04/10/97

Gold Star! yellow velvet crown,
impaled on a green sceptre:
spring's royal entrance

Red Emperor shoots--
hey, these are not deer lettuce!
Bambi, watch your rear.

Thom Williams writes 04/10/97

child, front tooth missing,
shouts, "Hey you, come to my house!"
at the rising moon

saint in yellow robes
holds the lemon to his lips,
smiling without care

J. Bob Green writes 04/10/97

Another snow day?
Old man winter is most sly!
Mother nature balks.

What is this folly?
They called for light rain today.
Four inches of snow?

The poet comments, "Hale-Bopp is slowing down....how do I know? There are 39 passengers on board!"

Monique de Plume writes 04/10/97

Earth hurtles through space,
Sun floats off toward nowhere--
What a ride we're on!

Lepus Consort writes 04/09/97

Under the cloud dome
Of blue skies, mom threw baseballs
I hit to this day

David Wood writes 04/09/97

heat ripples shimmer
broiling desert visitors
native lizards laugh

Gold Star! sparkling diamonds coil
beak and feathers thrust and whirl
in a dance of death

courageous sparrows
teeter at flight's first summons
leaping into life

Bunny Queen writes 04/09/97

Summer night, warm beach
Drizzling rain falls on the sand
Our hearts join as one

Richard Capella writes 04/09/97

butterfly doing
aerial acrobatics
over spring flowers

Richard Capella writes 04/08/97

yellow daffodil
says hello to spring, then greets
purple violet

Monique de Plume writes 04/07/97

as we get older
the earth rotates so quickly -
will we soon fly off?

Yes, in a sense...

Clove writes 04/07/97

Dog-day afternoon.
Dragonflies mime the Rainbow Dance:
Living Tao Now

The poet comments, "And nevermind the elusive gold star. This is MY truth!"

Suzanne Patterson writes 04/06/97

Must we all say good-
Night to the moon's mist within
Your eye this mourning?

Ashen remembrance
Turns to moist dew; soulless lips
Just in spite of you.

David Perkins writes 04/06/97

Gold Star! reaching for heaven,
old elm tree's newly clothed limbs;
my spirits soar too!

anole, spider
competing for the same spot;
mother nature wins.

Brad Pace writes 04/06/97

Dark as night can be
Shadows cast the small village
Slowly Swallowing

Wa Koo writes 04/05/97

Beneath soughing boughs
Through your leaves pass endless skies
O mighty dwarf tree.

Eternity here
Amid the fragrant past of
Japanese bamboo.

Early plum blossoms
Do not smile too much at me
Your brightness is spring.

Gold Star! Hale-Bopp-ity bop
My bunnies hippity hop
Past bright winkie stars.

Joe Shoe writes 04/05/97

Gold Star! Ah! What nice haiku!
Poet spoils by explaining
What it was about.

The poet comments, " alt. 3rd line: How it came about."

Sometimes the explanation is nice and helpful, sometimes it isn't...

The Reverend Joseph Blaylock writes 04/05/97

Steve Miller blasts out
from a radio, somewhere
in the other room.

The poet comments, ""My grandpa, he's 95; he keeps on dancin', he's still alive...""

Gold Star! I listen to songs
I had almost forgotten -
Rediscovering.

The poet comments, "The bands my parents, siblings, and I grew up with share space in the CD player, running on random."

Life without music
Is like life without eating
And living as easy.

The poet comments, "Perhaps I exaggerate my point; but probably not."

Jill Cline writes 04/05/97

Gold Star! white lily trumpets
ring joyful hallelujahs
He arose! He lives!

behind the comet
they sought a stronger life force
but Jesus is here....

Mary Ellen Walsh writes 04/05/97

I hear the insects
an unholy orchestra
from the baked ground

Moonchilde writes 04/05/97

Gold Star! Ancient prodigal!
You kiss the Sun's cheek, passing
Tail-first into Night

The poet comments, "Written after viewing the Hale-Bopp comet for the first time. I welcome comments and criticism, as always."

Agustin Eastwood De Mello writes 04/04/97

Comet moving fast
flashing across the dark sky
the voyager comes

Rae McKinley writes 04/04/97

snowing sideways in
April, such a cruel joke to
play on the tulips

LG writes 04/04/97

Three crows settle in.
Swaying white-branched sycamore.
Loud, raucous gossip.

Judith Gorgone writes 04/03/97

Japanese Shrines

Our neighborhood shrines
grants wishes and hears prayers.
everyday God for man

Mt.Fugi from the Plane

Gold Star! sits on the table
of winter clouds a surprise
dessert for my soul.

Papercuts

shadow of a ginko tree
lay flattened an oriental papercut
and sakura blossoms

Richard Capella writes 04/03/97

she romps with her kids.
long ago, we romped with her.
where have all the years gone?

Gold Star! doctor's smiling face
"I have some wonderful news"
tears in both our eyes

luna moth captured
by wide net of outdoor light
light off, victim free

Was April 3rd 'moth day'? (see below)

Lepus Consort writes 04/03/97

Gold Star! Breezy summer day
Soft image fixed in time
Lovely woman mine

The poet comments, "The first time I saw Anne Marie.."

David Wood writes 04/03/97

Gold Star! moths' epiphany
flying with sweet abandon
to oblivion

cricket's song of love
heralding summer romance
keeps me wide awake

bright armored columns
soldiers dressed in red and black
the ants march to war

Whitney writes 04/02/97

Whitney is my name
People think I am insane
But really I'm plain

Guido Keller writes 04/02/97

Shin worries:
Ikkyu rides bullock
freehand.

Omm The Mighty writes 04/01/97

On the Ides of March
The wind blows coldly, rushing
Uninhibited

Lisa the Heavenly Haikuer writes 04/01/97

Gold Star! With my Love in mind
I endure every pellet
Waiting my conquest

David Perkins writes 04/01/97

today's April first,
all fools' jokes are done today!
really? you too?

stone buddha garden
rocks amid wavy sand rows;
stop building there, ants!

Gold Star! it doesn't last long
this soft, late afternoon glow;
chill ushers in fall.

David Wood writes 04/01/97

dividing the clouds
stone towers press heavenward
awaiting God's voice

Gold Star! barren trees slumber
surrendering completely
to winter's embrace

swathed in mud and silt
frogs hibernate in silence
dreaming of spring rain


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