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The
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A Japanese Garden of Verse

Entries from January, 1997


Asengi writes 01/31/97

Words flow down the screen
A silent conversation
Emotions are not virtual

C. A. Dixon writes 01/31/97

Preaching, praying, songs
Stained glass windows, oaken pews
All there is to church?

Yesterday's hero
Today a free criminal
Who did kill his wife.

Mud-Wrestling

Bodies slick like glue
Holding on, slipping, sliding
Falling on the ground.

Lepus Consort writes 01/31/97

Gold Star! Purple sailors float
Beneath darkening red skies
To their destiny

The poet comments, "Haven't done haiku since college, 24 years. Recently inspired by Shin Po"

Adrift to nowhere,
Lost and longing for true love,
I found her spirit.

The poet comments, "For Anne-Marie"

Robin in winter,
A thought she might have known,
Her namesake's dear love.

Monique de Plume writes 01/30/97

In my secret spot
grow lots of four-leaf clovers
Am I so lucky?

kind to animals
we put cats and dogs to sleep
let people suffer

Shin Po writes 01/29/97

Snow-covered forest;
The stillness of the world --
Sights, sounds, all frozen.

Gold Star! Footprints in the snow;
I see where I have gone.
So many more to make............

The poet comments, "A comment on Life. Writer Jill Cline mentions that her friends don't like haiku; I find that it's an "acquired taste". (Most people don't "get it"). "

Hwei OH writes 01/29/97

Gold Star! Find me in despair
With rubber gloves and Windex
A non-existence

The poet comments, "Work was hell today. "

Carla G. Macapinlac writes 01/29/97

Gold Star! The cool breeze of spring
Whispers softly in my ear
Memories of you

The poet comments, "This is the only haiku I've ever written -- back in 1986 for a poetry class in college. Hope it suffices."

Agustin Eastwood De Mello writes 01/29/97

Gold Star! Sea lions mate loudly
beneath my bedroom window
disturbing my sleep

The grey whales swim past
my little pink seaside home
winter seas are cold

Feeding the wild cats
in my large backyard jungle
fingers are at risk

The poet comments, "This is a haiku trilogy relating to my interesting ocean-front environment..."

Judge Prozac writes 01/29/97

Gold Star! Where did they come from?
Where in this world can they go?
Now what do they do?

The poet comments, "We who dare not succomb to Haldol, Ritalin, or Prozac, must face this day, and the next, without the assistance of medication. Where will they go: they will come to us. Where did they come from: same as we. What do they do now? Survive......."

Monique de Plume writes 01/29/97

Nice hot shower spray
A belted-out Puccini
Hope neighbors can't hear!

Gold Star! cold relentless rain
could it be gods in tears
at what we've become?

The Sage reversed the order of "cold" and "relentless", because he thought it tripped more nicely on the tongue. Is that OK, Monique?

Little brown hamster
runs fast, while getting nowhere
like many people

Mark Hawkins writes 01/28/97

Gold Star! The sun shone on me
Will I see it shine today
On my balding head?

The days turn to nights
How time travels very fast
Death is near today

The poet comments, "I do not know if this is classified as a seasonal haiku, but I thought I would give it a try. "

Laur writes 01/28/97

Gold Star! yellow, orange, red
blue the hottest of the flame
wick and wax expire

foothills and mountains
hues richly crystalled reflect
in winter blue lakes

graceful sleeping trees
wear dazzling white snow mantles
dreaming springtime dreams

innocent meadow
buttercups and butterflies
bathed in summer sun

Howard Lee Kilby writes 01/27/97

one hundred and eight
peals from the great temple bell
snow on a monk's head

Jason C. Robinson writes 01/27/97

Plump as an orange
The juices dribble down my
chin. Sticky and Sweet!

Cathian C. Sanders-Saccacio writes 01/27/97

Gold Star! I love happy days
Mochi with anjinori
Mochi white as snow

A young student came
Summer visit from Japan
He brought us mochi.

He shared happy days
Baking and boiling mochi
Serving with chopsticks

He told of old ones
Who die each year from mochi
Because it is thick.

But we are yet young
We shall see many winters
Still eating mochi.

Watashi skidess
Mochi to anjinori
Domo arigato

The poet comments, "I love Mochi (rice gluten cake) with anjinori (seaweed). Thank you very much! This haiku is phonetic Japanese, as taught to me by a foreign exchange student (from Tokyo) whom we had the privilege of hosting."

Kumaramurthy Sivaramakrishnan writes 01/27/97

Knights in a cave,
Stalactites and Stalagmites,
In a stalemate.

Flossie Livingroom writes 01/27/97

Macaroni pie
Conceptualises all
So say the fairies

Tom Genovese writes 01/27/97

Gold Star! Early rising moon
surprises the setting sun
making the clouds blush

Low-flying airplane -
Giant Egret escapes in
a cloud of grackles

Jill Cline writes 01/26/97

Gold Star! red amaryllis
phoenix blooms in my kitchen
rising from the dark

leaden winter sky
looms over dirty white snow
the highway beckons

January thaw
sparrows splash in brown bird bath
my face seeks the sun

The poet comments, "Several of my friends made fun of my liking for haiku. I am going to refer them to your site... "

Please do!

Tom Genovese writes 01/26/97

Gold Star! Stained glass museum,
wisterias still blooming
on the old lampshade

Full moon in the east,
Sun not yet set in the west --
Is it night or day?

Monique de Plume writes 01/25/97

relentless spring rain
eroding 'most everything
makes nature flower

Gold Star! Just a taste of fame
suffices to convince the wise
'tis both sweet and sour.

The poet comments, "I suppose this is more an epigram than a haiku, or is it?"

white Indian pipes
fragile reminders of life
rising from decay

Gold Star! Raucous starlings crow
like at our family dinners
all screeching at once

The poet comments, "Don't really know if they're starlings, but they are noisy!"

Tom Genovese writes 01/25/97

Gold Star! On my morning walk
an animal symphony
announcing the dawn

Kumaramurthy Sivaramakrishnan writes 01/24/97

Some stars are big,
Even stars that are small
Shine as bright.

The poet comments, "inspired by the terracing of awarded stars in the haiku section. poet suggests why not shrink the star a bit for the haiku section."

Toast Point still doesn't know what's going on with the stars and must check it out.

Gold Star! Oh! Divine Sage
Lead me to my star
Gold I was told.

Junior drinks milk,
Wipes off his milk moustache,
Coaxes to lend him mine.

Tom Genovese writes 01/24/97

Gold Star! Under the streetlight
Children wait for the school bus,
Their breath puffs of steam

Shin Po writes 01/23/97

Gold Star! Writing my Emails;
Dammmit! Before I finish,
Disconnected ag

The poet comments, "I added a little humor into a Haiku by relating an experience we're ALL familiar with! "

The Sage added a sentence to make it 5-7-5, just because he thought he should...

McGhee writes 01/23/97

bitter, biting wind
dusty white powder-snow blows
too cold to breathe. pain.

Tom Genovese writes 01/23/97

On the tranquil lake
only a sail can be seen
above the morning mist

Gerbo writes 01/23/97

Gold Star! Live dangerously!
File taxes after deadline
Without extension

The poet comments, "IRS has been in the back of my mind lately, what can I say."

Agustin Eastwood De Mello writes 01/22/97

Samurai sword cuts
life out of adversary
the fall leaf crumbles

Gold Star! Enchanted Tengu
your sword cannot cut flowers
the snow has fallen

The poet comments, "I have enjoyed reading all the fine haiku in this collection."

Carolyne Rohrig writes 01/22/97

Gold Star! Summer thunder storm
Billowy clouds in the sky -
Duck under cover.

The poet comments, "I needed a quiet moment to relax in the middle of a classroom of 29 eight year olds."

Eek! Children!

Gerbo writes 01/22/97

"Ready to pre-board"
Means you have to get on plane
Before you get on!

The poet comments, "Idea for this lifted shamelessly from a George Carlin quote."

Courtney writes 01/22/97

Shadows masking light
unveil themselves at midnight
covering our sight

Gold Star! eyes tell the secrets
of all hidden emotions
kept within ourselves

Timothy W. Holley writes 01/22/97

Gold Star! Far away her day
Fades away into the night
Mine has just begun

The poet comments, "I am dedicating this haiku to all the U.S. Soldiers that are far away from the one they love the most."

Opalfire writes 01/21/97

Gold Star! Great Gaels of Ireland,
the people that God made mad,
wars happy, songs sad.

The poet comments, "Adapted from a verse by G.K. Chesterton."

jkc..k writes 01/21/97

A Jazz Trilogy

Gold Star! Breaths through jazz man's reed
Peak inner souls emotion.
Body drifts through mind.

Dim lights harsh shadows,
Dissonance of cool jazz chords
Twist blurred images.

Visions change with mood,
Head nods gently with rhythms.
Mind floats suspending soul.

Lori Kline writes 01/21/97

Gold Star! Your voice a deep dream,
Resonates through the timber,
Jade forests slumber.

lwg writes 01/21/97

January thaw.
three women downtown at lunch.
guess I've thawed out too.

The poet comments, "its been a long hard lonely winter :)"

The poet also comments, "Hey Sage brush! Been away, enjoyed the new stuff."

Sage Brush bows.

TJ writes 01/21/97

White concrete sidewalk
Narrow red river of ants
Pebbles seem mountains

John San writes 01/21/97

Gold Star! Bosnia Winter
Thank you, Mr. President
Wife wants a divorce

The poet comments, "Dedicated to the Soldiers who are losing their spouses due to long deployments "

Gold stars are pretty
they are brilliant and nice
next to this haiku

Nice try, John-San...

Carolyne Rohrig writes 01/20/97

Grey and rainy day
Sparrow on a wet roof top
A picture of loneliness

The poet comments, "It's been pouring in Northern California for weeks now. Outside my window I saw the picture described in my haiku. It captured my state of mind at the time."

Agustin Eastwood De Mello writes 01/19/97

Come here little flea
and teach a very old man
to leap to a star

My big little son
your shoes do not fit your feet
the winter was long

Grandfather, you sleep
beneath all those spring flowers
I see everywhere

Tiger cat chasing
butterflies in my back yard
morning exercise

Turtle on the road
crawling alone in springtime
seeking his shellmate

Gold Star! Rain goddess showers
gardens beneath her storm clouds
happy birds singing

Gold Star! My guitar playing
attracts beautiful women
on hot summer nights

Gold Star! Father, all your wars
left very many dead men
among the flowers

Volcano painting
golden images lighting
coral castle halls

Gold Star! The sea follows moon
until the very jealous
shore stops the romance

The poet thanked us in some form or other for every entry submitted. No, thank YOU!

The Convivial Codfish writes 01/19/97

Warm pecan brownies,
Vanilla ice cream, hot fudge -
So much for snacks. Lunch?

To lure him away
From his games, I yell for help.
All I want is sex.

The poet comments, "Monique de Plume suggested writing haiku on all of the Seven Deadly Sins. This is my attempt on gluttony and one of my attempts on lust. "

Gold Star! Under the covers,
We do things that shock the cat -
The stuffy old thing!

The poet comments, "Where I live, "covers" (plural) is a seasonal word; most of the year it's too hot for more than a single sheet. :-) "

Gold Star! Hot. Cold. Warm. Freezing.
Another winter passes
In Mississippi.

Shin Po writes 01/19/97

Deep night --
Silent snowflakes
Touch the Earth........

Gold Star! The unkempt garden ---
A Madonna statue
Blesses the weeds.......

My salad --
The lettuce just lays there;
The CRUNCH of carrots!

Monique de Plume writes 01/18/97

Gold Star! Big gray Maine coon cat
curled up on the satin chair
King of his castle.

Clip clop go
the urchin's zori's
under pouring rain.

The poet comments, "Hope Jacques Navarro (12-26-96) doesn't mind my doing over his delightful haiku. Just wanted to show how much it loses in a less romantic setting. The next one, also based on his, is another example."

Brand new suitcases
VISA in my pocketbook
No one to go with.

Gold Star! power-pole necklaces
decorate majestic hills
improving nature?

Opalfire writes 01/18/97

Gold Star! Wheelbarrow color
orange, red, yellow, paint pots
rolling spring flowers.

Richard Barry writes 01/18/97

I lie dreaming
In the caverns of my mind
Winter rain falls

John San writes 01/18/97

Emma, she's not dead
you are much too young to know
that's the way they're taught

The poet comments, "please link to my web site http://freud.readadp.com/seagull. Hey what's up with the gold star?" Toast Point replies, "OK, but testing it now, I'm not getting a response. And what's wrong with the gold star?"

Shin Po writes 01/18/97

Old shop window -
No one buys
The withered Bonsai.

December 26th -
Christmas trees
Adorn the garbage cans.

Hallowe'en -
The darkened streets --
Skeletons in the rain.

Hot summer night;-
Lightning flash! Crickets discuss
The coming storm.

Darkened streets --
We pass the lit windows
And wonder what happens inside.

Fred Donovan writes 01/17/97

a tailless squirrel
scurries along a dirt path
unseen, a cat waits

Gold Star! for millennia
water sculpts the stone landscape
one flake at a time

concert in the rain
Pavarotti's voice hovers
in the heavy air

Kumaramurthy Sivaramakrishnan writes 01/17/97

Today at noon
Even my shadow deserted
I feel all alone

Gold Star! No more alcohol!
Johns have mirrors now!
Oh! it's the sink.

Gold Star! A pun competition,
Sent ten of mine to win
No pun in ten did.

The poet comments, "condensed from an e-mail doing its rounds."

Monique de Plume writes 01/17/97

Gold Star! A light spring rain falls.
Graveyard trees look indistinct
as if seen through tears.

A flock of seagulls
flutters down to the park lawn.
They know it will rain.

Gerbo writes 01/16/97

hawk on a dead branch
hunter with white epaulets
waiting motionless

moon over the bridge
river floods my heart tonight
dark swirling waters

Kumaramurthy Sivaramakrishnan writes 01/16/97

A Siberian winter
Trailing escaping brethren
A nostalgic crane

Gold Star! A poet painted
The Sun rose wind blue
Dictionary colors

All his life
He stood in a queue
Life passed by

The poet comments, "A modification of what Confucius said?"

Richard Barry writes 01/16/97

The Fog skittered
lightly over the water.
The Sun chased it.

Emma at 4 writes 01/16/97

Gold Star! so curly hair, but
no face or body or juice
that lady is dead

The poet comments, "Emma V. at 4 years old"

The Sage is suitably impressed.

Rob writes 01/16/97

Do you see it there
It is the lion so strong
Now it fades away

Herman Lo writes 01/15/97

Spring, the beginning
Flowers, trees all starts to grow....
It's just beautiful

Kumaramurthy Sivaramakrishnan writes 01/15/97

Gold Star! Whiz-Kid Pete Tabback
Cursed the misspelt word
Silently tabbed back

Kumaramurthy Sivaramakrishnan writes 01/15/97

A bun at a bakery
Looked like the Romanian nun
They call it nun-bun

The poet comments, "True life story of a bun baked in a Nashville Bakery, looking like Mother Teresa. An image is on the web too, I forget where. The poet vouches striking similarity between the bun & the nun."

Zoned Cat writes 01/15/97

Gold Star! zillions of flakes
rolled and molded into men
coal eyes twinkle

jkc..k writes 01/15/97

Gold Star! Days lengthen slowly
Promise of the coming spring
Sooths frost-bitten nose.

Kurtis Heinen writes 01/14/97

Skies purple twilight
Sun, moon, stars, and then mourning
I fear the reason

Kumaramurthy Sivaramakrishnan writes 01/14/97

I don't know why
How much ever I try
I still can't fly

Gold Star! Seasonal Word 'Flu'
While composing a 'Haiku'
Made me 'Aaachoo!'

The Sage changed "syllable" to "word" to correct the phrase and the scansion.

Monique de Plume writes 01/13/97

Ant cities thriving
Sudden showers flood the lawn
Civilizations lost!

It is past midnight
The airport is deserted
It feels so surreal

The runner is sad
He just won second place
He is so jealous!

The poet comments, "I thought I'd sometime write one on each of the seven deadly sins. This one, of course, is envy. Anybody is welcome to continue the list."

Gold Star! In my secret place
Spring rains have swelled the creek
Minnows glint in the sun.

Jim Jividen writes 01/13/97

Gold Star! Let's go surfin' now
Everybody's learnin' how
Beach Boys don't haiku

The poet comments, "The archetypes of summer are deftly disgraced in what I consider my finest beach haiku. "

Deft, indeed!

Christy Turlington
especially from the back
sure would like me some

The poet comments, " Another scathing post-feminist haiku from my ubermodel period."

LTJ25@aol.com writes 01/13/97

Why does the dove fly?
It is filled with joyfulness
In the tree above

Norma Jean Carter writes 01/12/97

Cracked corn in the
feeder, attracting cardinals
and mourning doves.

Sir Bob writes 01/12/97

recall about blue
and you are my true vision
through the lazy ache

Asengi writes 01/11/97

Gold Star! Streaming leaves floating
Shadows walk along the path
I sip tea with you

The poet comments, "A first attempt"

The Sage comments, "Very nice - strong imagery."

Kat writes 01/11/97

The swinging gate
the empty bench
a sweater tossed aside

Laur writes 01/11/97

Gold Star! Grey skeleton trees
etched on grey velvet
bring mid-winter blues

I have hazel eyes
grey-blue-green with yellow stars
gateway to my soul

Gerbo writes 01/11/97

Gold Star! my wife scraping ice
primed for an expedition
shopping mall beckons

Humorous, syllable count and seasonal word! Bravo!

Kathy Grover writes 01/10/97

Gold Star! treetops of jewels -
citrine, garnet, gold topaz -
frame amethyst skies

The poet comments, "Written last November but stored away until now."

The heart can discern:
Pleasure is evanescent
True joy leaves markers

The poet comments, "Written after being embraced by someone I love deeply."

Gold Star! The wind blows freely;
Julia runs and dances.
Who would contain them?

Love hunts down and wounds.
There's no hiding: turn around;
In pain, embrace love.

The poet comments, "One silver lining to the cloud of pain of unrequited love is that it releases poetic urges."

Gerbo writes 01/10/97

dark snowy highway
under bridge, brake lights startle
thinking of my son

Moonchilde writes 01/10/97

Gold Star! Nightmare! Heart thunders!
I bolt headlong from dreaming -
Fear sizzles through me.

And through us, too!

Jill Cline writes 01/09/97

Gold Star! Flickering red flames
Oak logs, burning hot
Hearth at home's center

Gold Star! Velvet star-pierced sky
white light a cold reminder
ancient worlds long dead.

Cold winter-clear sky
I look up at distant stars
do they see me here?

Twinkling, white stars
caught in the bare, black branches
of the old oak tree

Gold Star! Icy south window
alive with ransomed green'ry
foreshadows spring's hope

Monique de Plume writes 01/08/97

Rain falls on the roof
I snuggle in a warm bed
I am so lucky!

The poet comments, "This thought occurred to me often during the recent rains in the western US. Have I heard it before? It prompted the next haiku."

Gold Star! Pearls of wisdom
embedded in the subconscious
What seeded their growth?

Jeremy Brashaw writes 01/08/97

water bed
my
liferaft

And you thought haikus were minimalist anyway...

Nathan Lewis writes 01/08/97

art museum
two children point and giggle
the nude statue

Arnold Vermeeren writes 1/8

Gold Star! december cemetery -
an edge of bare shrubs
full of white berries

a dun path
to the ashes dispersal grounds...
golden leaves

through the window
the blackbird couple stares at me -
frost-white earth

Chibiusa writes 01/07/97

The cold snowflakes fall
The roads are covered with ice
And we still have school?!?!

The poet comments, "This poem was inspired by December 6th, the day that the superintendent was in Florida while we had a nasty snowstorm and shouldn't have had school."

Garret Carson writes 01/07/97

Flowers on a grave,
blooms facing towards Heaven;
symbols of our hope .

Gold Star! Lieutenant Powers,
Soda machine is empty.
I called the vendor.

The poet comments, "A friend and I, being displaced poets and posing as Coast Guard officers, often played little word games. Our favorite was to look for haiku unintentionally(?) hidden within the glut of daily official correspondance. This was my favorite, found in a quickly written note."

John San writes 01/07/97

gems do Netmeeting
tiny fingers type to me
parents watch TV

The poet comments, "I had a pleasurable encounter over Netmeeting with a lovely Japanese lady name Asako. I was so impressed by her that I had to write a Haiku (which I sent immediately to her). Anyway.... thought it would be nice to see it here."

John, your link is to your page as requested.

Sir Robert of Rocher writes 01/07/97

Frost again appears.
New life lurks under the ice.
Waiting for Spring Thaw.

The poet comments, "It's only 23 weeks until summer.
Only 10 weeks to spring.
Forecast cold with future bright! "

Craig Chapman writes 01/06/97

the birds are lifting
now they can see all that lives
and look down on death.

Monique de Plume writes 01/05/97

Viewed from high above,
dazzling clouds far as eye can see
Where are the angels?

The poet comments, "Thoughts on my first supersonic flight."

Mary Ellen Walsh writes 01/05/97

We are more than flesh
covered skulls of gleaming
human perfection

Gerbo writes 01/04/97

cold rhododendron
leaves drooping like a dog's ears
soon spring will whistle

The poet comments, "A haiku a day keeps the blahs at bay. Nice site, Sage."
The Sage bows.

Moonchilde writes 01/03/97

Shrouded in gray lace,
the Everglades lies brooding,
mourning lost children.

The poet comments, "A Happy New Year to all, and especially to you and the Sage. As always, I welcome feedback."

Hoss writes 01/03/97

Gold Star! distant gems give light
tiny tracks mar perfect white
fox scares hare to flight

jkc..k writes 01/03/97

Gold Star! Boughs bent to limit,
Encrusted with ice jewels,
Imprisoned trees moan.

Gerbo writes 01/02/97

Gold Star! my father at rest
leaving his old arguments
like discarded clothes

Garret Carson writes 01/02/97

Gold Star! A baby's giggle
Floating by on angel's wings
Ascends to Heaven

The poet comments, "Inspired by a picture of my nieces."

Jim Leavers writes 01/02/97

a fat fly and i
are gently buzzing
harmonies

A.L. Guy writes 01/02/97

trees sway back and forth
there is no breeze to speak of
they must be dancing

Gold Star! cares float toward the sky
thoughts play tag on summer winds
worries disappear

Monique (Pronounced Moniker) de Plume writes 01/01/97

Icy fluids drip
Through my icy-cold body.
How can I get well?

The poet comments, "Inspired by my appendectomy last year."

Toast Point, home with a cold, is producing a few fluids of his own.

Dewdrops magnify
green cells metabolizing
Sunlight is their food.

Robins chasing worms,
Myosin pulling actin.
Living things alike.

The poet comments, "Don't know how much significance this has to others. I was once a protein biochemist."

Gold Star! Every night we sink
Into welcome oblivion.
Why should we fear death?


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