Japanese Ornaments

The
Toast Point
Haiku Contest!

A Japanese Garden of Verse

Entries from December, 1997

last updated January 1 - Happy New Year!

Tom Blaser writes 12/30/97

Circumstances
never seem to match up with
my forecast

Her son is like him
An image in the mirror
without the thing itself

Ahmed A. Khan writes 12/30/97

Gold Star! Rose with poison thorn
Red sun rising on her brow
Shi stoops to conquer

The poet comments, "A haiku in praise of one of the greatest heroines in comics: Shi, created by Bill Tucci."

Linda Whitlow writes 12/29/97

Gold Star! A sudden snowstorm;
It surrenders to steaming
cups of ginger tea.

Hibernating frog
sleeps hopeful in frozen mud;
dreams of dragonflies.

Sergei Braun writes 12/29/97

Bright airplanes fall down.
Bristle petals of sky blossoms
Banish'd from heaven.

Gold Star! Cocoon of darkness.
Only eternity shines
through pinholes of stars.

Mary-Liezel Benitez Moraleja writes 12/29/97

As the guru sits
Beyond heaven's perfection
She still cries like us.

The sun is shining
Watching you through raindrops light
I keep myself warm

Richard Capella writes 12/26/97

Gold Star! Shimmering crystals
Christmas day at last
Squeaks, screams of delight, laughter
Delirious joy

We sit, holding hands
love reflected by the lights
of Christmas--not gifts

Snowflakes slide to earth
golden sunlight streams through them
treasure to behold

LOWCOO writes 12/24/97

NO SNOW
THE FEAR OF DEATH
AT CHRISTMAS

Lindsay Bennett writes 12/22/97

Winter trees are hands
That into the night reach out
to touch, feel and hold.

Cavac Kolok writes 12/22/97

For my New Age Christmas
A cybertree glistens on screen
For sleigh bell click here.

Survival and gain
It's really taxing my brain
Red, silvers and greens

Toast Point assumed that "slivers" was really "silvers", but he could be wrong.

In silent forests
The sword fern cuts through the night
Black between greyness

I watched silently
as a deer sat near a brook
stealth not intended

Gold Star! How can something so
simple be so hard to write?
Good things take more time!

Snow is worth getting
If all else fails to please us
A most simple thing

Over at the toy store
I saw the fake Santa Claus
With his knowing smile

Separation now
Others cannot play with us
at the holidays

A wellspring of joy
That the holidays appoint
Celebrate all things

The Sage advises the poet not to submit in ALL CAPS again, or risk punishment!

Maureen writes 12/21/97

Gold Star! Shimmering crystals
whirling in the icy clasp
of Gods' winter breath

Hank Hill writes 12/21/97

Tears filling my eyes.
My son back in his blue dress.
Boy, I tell you what.

This variation on Bob's haiku about his son in the marines had occurred to Toast Point as well, but he decided not to run with it...

Sergei Braun writes 12/20/97

Gold Star! Gray December day
Dull as bourgeois morals.
Let's paint the earth white!

- Let me in, I'm cold!
- Who's knocking at my window?
- Pliant hands of rain.

Daniel McClanahan writes 12/20/97

Sunset is awsome
It speaks blue, pink, yellow, red
I stare in great thought

Judith Gorgone writes 12/20/97

shimmering tinsel
glitter on a winter stage
the birch trees enchant

Gold Star! a glow of colors
hues of love, joy and world peace
Christmas season sings

let Christmas twinkle
through bright lights and bright hearts
sparks of life and love

The snow moon slithers
into vast thickening clouds
a flake kisses me

Gold Star! no incense burning
empty kimchi pots clustered
lifeless winter temples

huddled in plastic
they slurp hot soup for their souls
by kerosene stoves

The poet comments, "(pojang macah,sidewalk stalls-Korea)"

Cindy Rose Rudometkin writes 12/19/97

She bears the burden
Of apathy in the form
Of a phantom cross

Sandra Watkins writes 12/19/97

consider the leaf
the oxygen it gives, life
its gifts of color

Kimberly R. Langston writes 12/19/97

Gold Star! Parting an orange,
It spits juice on my bare chest-
A pleasant startle.

The poet comments, "I've been on a fruit kick lately!"

Richard Capella writes 12/18/97

Gold Star! Christmas tree lights flash
steady hypnotic cadence
winking ,blinking. nod

Our pine tree wafts out
its special fragrance labled
"Christmas Time Perfume"

hard to believe but
it will be our fortieth
Christmas together

Congrats! Wumpus and Toast Point are approaching their fourth, which seems like a miracle in itself.

D.J. Vanden Langenberg writes 12/18/97

Gold Star! Santa's twinkling eyes
brings thoughts of candy and toys
to all girls and boys

Sketchly writes 12/18/97

Gold Star! goldfish whirl
round and round and round!
a paw dips

silent savanna -
hyena licked from paw
blood-washed lion sleeps

field mice scurry
a barn owl blinks-
red sunset

mother robin
her first flight for food-
"caw! caw!"

Leech Crich writes 12/18/97

Gold Star! The smudge on the wall
Morphing to dinosaur shape
Tyrannosaurus?

The poet comments, "This is a haiku about what else I do all day at work apart from writing bad fiction.Is there anybody out there? My bastard husband claims to be too busy to send me stupid E-mail."

Richard Capella writes 12/17/97

Gold Star! Bunkers, walls, crosses
all give testimony to
Gettysburg's battle

P.R.B. writes 12/17/97

Leaves falling in Fall,
Jumping and playing in leaves,
Going back to school!

The poet comments, "These are things I do in the Fall!"

J.G. writes 12/17/97

Snowflakes fall from air,
Landing on the palm of hand,
Where they melt there fast.

J.J.T.T. writes 12/17/97

When the Seahawks played
against the rought tufest
they were the best team.

H.L.F. writes 12/17/97

Lovely flowers bloom.
In the spring time in the sun.
That's when flowers bloom.

M.M. writes 12/17/97

Gentle blowing winds
Spring has come. Flowers have sprung.
Birds always chirping.

Bob writes 12/16/97

Gold Star! Tears filling my eyes
My son back in his dress blues
Can that be my boy?

Jesse C. Diaz writes 12/16/97

I breathe in slow and
exhale the "I love you" that
remains unspoken.

Hay Zen writes 12/15/97

Gold Star! The sound of water
When it's flowing down the cheek
Is complete silence

Gold Star! City: a spider
Has no luck crossing the street
In morning rush-hour

Reading Basho
I kept being distracted
By the heater sound

Fall: yellow birch leaves
Are nowhere to be noticed
My home's left behind

Walking in dry leaves
I sweep them with my feet as
If browsing a book

Weak, quiet, shy, restrained,
So unlike what it could be
Candle flame in a glass.

Gold Star! Tomorrow's coming
Inevitable, merciless
A Sunday's evening

A leaf on a tree
The last one left, like Noah
It's be gone soon, too

Leo writes 12/15/97

Gold Star! the love I yearn for
the hatred that always was
the day I left her.

Moonlover writes 12/15/97

She listens to me
She follows me, she leads me
She is my best friend

The poet comments, "This is what the great moon and her world means to me."

Sergei Braun writes 12/14/97

Gold Star! Ancient port is gone.
Sea has neither memory,
nor age or mercy

Evening's quiet
I can hear snowflakes dying
Crush'd under my feet.

Bonnie writes 12/14/97

Soothing gray lingers
Raindrops dance on cool, damp earth
Bitter joy of tears

Paul Miller writes 12/14/97

Gold Star! Mirror-Bright River,
This old tree's only journey:
Pall-bearers of ice.

Two Geese flying by,
The Pastel Moon in Daylight:
This dying Winter.

If this last, lone leaf,
Just now, should tremble and fall:
I am blown away!

Thomas writes 12/13/97

sun on snow again
the whole dawn jewel box -- foal's
breath hangs in the air

John Mulder, the Netherlands writes 12/13/97

A year reflects
again all my doings
and ever again

The poet comments, "I wish all haiku writers a merry Christmas and a happy 1998"

Don't see them yet
but Cranes are flying over
their calls came forward.

The silver moonlight
became suppressed this night
by Mother Earth.

The poet comments, "What is correct: was suppressed or became depressed ?"

Suppressed (if we grasp your meaning correctly)

Gold Star! Summer snow-flakes-
airy-flying willow-fluff
like all my own thoughts.

Late evening sun
is painting gold on the waves-
the real aqua-tint.

The poet comments, "Thanks to the Sage for all the work in Haikuland and a happy newyear"

Sunshine writes 12/12/97

Houston winter rain
blood and ice on the freeway
only one week a year

The poet comments, ""the rest of the year there is blood without ice." sms"

Marie Fletcher writes 12/12/97

The birds are chirping
The sun is shining brightly
Please don't start to rain.

Donna Bronn writes 12/12/97

Winter time is cold
In the morning and at night
Watch out for frostbite

LOWCOO writes 12/10/97

Gold Star! drive through Everglades
snake drops down from tree above
a WINDSHIELD VIPER

The poet comments, " what! no gold star for this masterpiece."

Once we cleaned up misspellings and syllable mismatches, we liked it a lot!

Jim Adams writes 12/10/97

Gold Star! In primeval past
Proud Tyrannosaurus Rex
Uh-oh! Asteroid!

Michael Jay Burns writes 12/10/97

liquid autumn night
lit by rays from long-dead suns
becomes tomorrow

Sketchly writes 12/10/97

Gold Star! rusted nails pop
as snow-laden rafters bow -
look out cow!

white petals fade
starving beneath the redwoods-
the sun is hidden

strange red dragonfly
flying against the wind-watch!
clouds are turning black

brown leaves
drifting in a stream-goodbye
august always leaves

Eric Rangner Edd writes 12/09/97

tulips grasping one
lovely freed awakening
growth in the spring tide

Debra Amon writes 12/09/97

I love the springtime
scents of flowers fill the air
happy am I now

DeVar writes 12/09/97

Gold Star! Soft pillow, warm quilts
Dreamy awareness of place
Jarring alarm clock

The poet comments, "Waking up can be a haiku (senyru) moment!"

Shimmery ice gowns
Trees wear a change of clothing
Foggy winter mist

Gold Star! Breakfast apple boats
Peanut butter passengers
Final boarding call

The poet comments, "When my chidren were little they liked apple slices with peanut butter for breafast. This reminds me of them at that time."

Joan Monahan writes 12/09/97

Snowflakes glistening
City dwellers bustling
Making memories.

The poet comments, "Holiday scenes... A time to remember the magic of New York holidays. Whatever the winter celebration, the anticipation is always joyful. "

Just Sit writes 12/09/97

It's hard to type
cat in my lap purring
it must be cold

The poet comments, "I was about to send you a small poem and my cat, who stays in my California garden, could not be shooed from my lap. After the rains it was in the high 40's she was so happy to be inside "

Toast Point's 200-lb. cat frequently does the same.

Do you ever get wet?
clouds part slowly
hazy winter moon

The poet comments, "After many days of rain the moon came to visit"

yes, you too fleas
on my cat
in for a cold night

The poet comments, "A candle lit for Issa"

Gold Star! the smell of childhood gone
returned from so far
one Christmas tree

Mad for It writes 12/08/97

Eyes well up today
during this moment I cry
then comes sympathy

The poet comments, " please read this haiku because it has a lot of meaning in it email me with any comments"

D.J. Vanden Langenberg writes 12/08/97

Autumn's changing leaves
like a love tryst's fading lust
red hot to scorched brown

Eric Mart writes 12/08/97

Sun sets. Movement slows.
Clouds assume their night attire.
Morpheus beckons.

The poet comments, "Morpheus is the god of dreams!"

Walter Parrish writes 12/07/97

The raindrop hits
causing a ripple to form
In life's river

LOWCOO writes 12/06/97

off to work at dawn
in my happiness
birds chirp

Stacy Marie Gonzales writes 12/06/97

Love is foolishness
Wasting everyone's time while
Breaking hearts world-wide.

Obliterating
Everything Respectable
Full of Spite and Lies

The poet comments, "This one is about Hate"

Two Lamas writes 12/05/97

Gold Star! my hands are as cold
as my sore eyes seeing
empty hot cocoa box

waitress leaves the bill
and turns away with stern shoes --
my coffee's bitter

are you awake? no,
she answers, sadly smiling,
I just had a dream. . .

HentaiGrrl writes 12/05/97

This school really sucks
To them I'm "Damn Yankee", the
Chick from New Jersey

J&S writes 12/05/97

The moon goes away
The sun rises in the east
Goodbye moon goodbye

The poet comments, "This poem reminds me of the nursery rhyme Hey Diddle Diddle The cat and the fiddle The cow jumped over the moon!!!!!!!!!"

Tim Riley writes 12/05/97

your lies sting like bees
that leave their painful stinger
still stuck in my heart

Penny Merryfield writes 12/04/97

Eggnog with nutmeg
Decorated pine tree glows
Jingle bell music

Lining up in stores
Arms filled with presents for all
Lines at soup kitchens

Calico kittens
Hot spicy apple cider
Country Christmas Cheer

The poet comments, "Happy Holidays to all!"

H. Douglas Rhoads writes 12/04/97

Gold Star! October sunflowers -
rows of defeated soldiers
leaning in the frost

At his funeral
I wear my father's coat -
oh the rain...the rain

Dussler/Sunshine writes 12/04/97

I'm here, she is not
Sweet smells have left my pillow
And I remain strong

The poet comments, "Nothing like a little java, friendship and Haiku to see you through."

Time spent in the woods
Escaping progress of man
Natural progression

Dussler writes 12/04/97

Gold Star! Have you ever known
Days truer, fuller, brighter
Than days spent in love?

Antoine writes 12/04/97

Gold Star! Face au téléphone,
ce sentiment d'abandon.
Que la nuit tombe tôt !

The poet translates,
Facing the telephone,
that feeling of desertion.
How early falls the night!"

Saah writes 12/04/97

Gold Star! It swallows clouds
and spits out mountains-
the morning fog!

C. Dawson writes 12/03/97

inner strength depletes
stoical pain inflicts the soul
autophobia

The poet comments, "hmm....it's still a bit challenging.... what do the stars by the names mean?"

The Sage awards Gold Stars to those haikus that are particularly wonderful.

Hector Sierra writes 12/03/97

Stormy day
I am full of joy
God rages

Japanese tourists
On the island that once was
Part of the Empire

Gold Star! Gold fish
The same pond
Where I found a corpse

Natasha and the woods
Cherries for lips
Nipples for strawberries

Daisy Hill writes 12/02/97

A limerick by
my friend Cy, turned out to be
more like a hai. Ku.

The poet comments, "What the hell, I entered it in BOTH categories."

J writes 12/02/97

The mountains reach on
Till they seem to touch the sky
And then pierce the clouds

The sun is setting
Darkness falls over the earth
Moonlight makes shadows

The sly cat is still
Silently watching its prey
Almost time to pounce

Moving slowly on
The tide wears the rocky cliffs
Rising and falling

Writer writes 12/01/97

Gold Star! Haiku? She inquired.
"Bless you," he replied inspired.
Thus their love expired.

Blonde hair in the wind,
She runs across the meadow
And into my heart.

Jimbob writes 12/01/97

We are more worried
About stepping on some toes
Than solving problems.

Dr. Prozac writes 12/01/97

Gold Star! Lost Ethnicity
A rainbow without color
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