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The
Toast Point
Haiku Contest!

A Japanese Garden of Verse

Entries from November, 1997


Sergei Braun writes 11/30/97

What is wrong with me?
I think that stars are dust, and
grains of sand are worlds.

The days are shrinking.
At last, threadbare sun is gone...
Never to return.

Drip-drop, drip-drop, drip.
Drippity, drippity, drop.
Raindrops, rain drum... Brahms?

Lifeless branches speak
Sign language of the orchards,
Mortals cannot read.

Mikel writes 11/29/97

Gold Star! Your name carved on stone
Too late to share the love I have
I must join you soon

Yes, I have no wings
It is true, I cannot fly
Yet I still will try

Spring and summer, spent
For others, while fall days lead
To my wintertime

Wings of silver lace
Sound in graceful pixie flight
Sweet music, princess

Butterfly kisses
Gently touch my heart, closing
Wounds that would not heal

J writes 11/30/97

Sunlight slowly fades
Shadows move stealthily on
Concealing secrets

Ross Weaver writes 11/29/97

The yearnings of mind
growing from and so unlike
predatory Earth

where all mortals born
kill, eat and change to become
each need to escape

as wealth empowers
six billion ambitious dreams
on a lost planet.

John Mulder, the Netherlands writes 11/29/97

Gold Star! Blood-red sunlight creeps
slowly up against the wall
and slips into the window

Gold Star! The cloister-bells
thin ringing over open field.
Devotion audible.

Goose flying in V-form-
over cold and jet-black ice
scratching skaters.

The sea gnaws always
at the tangle root-system
of the mangrove-woods

Very clear Comet
pushed quickly through the Great-Bear
and broke to pieces

John, nice to have you back!

Chira writes 11/27/97

Gold Star! Wrinkled wet tissues
White like the first snow
Sniff, wheeze, achoo!

Clickety clack
Keyboard falls silent
Nothing to write

Henry Hile writes 11/27/97

Autumn colors gone
Kids, friends, family from afar
Thanksgiving once more

The poet comments, "Searching web for a Thanksgiving toast brought me to your page. Thought I'd try my hand. thanks"

Lowcoo writes 11/26/97

Gold Star! winter comes
sighing for the disappearance
of women's legs

Lindsey writes 11/24/97

Life is a ladder,
Success being at the top...
For the strong to reach.

Gold Star! Moms are like flashlights,
Guiding us through life's darkness....
Brightening our paths.

Happy Birthday to Toast Point's Mom, 11/28!

IggySuePea writes 11/24/97

soul of man in bloom
id ego superego
demon, reason, god

lifeless bits of shell
shimmer frantic under veil
fingers touching stars

Sergei Braun writes 11/23/97

Chill November night
sleeps, dreaming ... how it could be,
if it would be not.

Gold Star! Cars seek home through dark.
Moon, a pupil in God's eye,
watches dancing lights

LOWCOO writes 11/23/97

married lover
comes
and goes

Untitled writes 11/22/97

A stormy gray sky
and a turbulent ocean,
there's no horizon.

Murph writes 11/22/97

I'd never kissed once
But now gladly I kiss one
I cannot kiss once

Tom Blaser writes 11/22/97

Quiet neighborhood.
Survival in the suburbs
after the snowstorm

Gold Star! Pushing worry
out the car window
with my elbow

Kevin Drizen writes 11/22/97

Pictures from the past
are not familiar to me
time is cruel but fair

Gold Star! There was a time when
all things were worth living for
now I'm so tired

The cemetery
has visitors present today
grandparents of tommorow

Death overcomes all
our children age much like us
who'll inherit first

A man died today
the vultures came to collect
nothing left of the man

Children play in dirt
a flower sprouts through the mess
you crush it quickly

Heaven or Hell for him?
one sister hates, the other not sure
fifty-fifty chance

You told your son why
he didn't believe you of course
now he understands

Amani Virgo writes 11/22/97

hot sweet honey breath
the season of tempting rains
it envelopes me

The poet comments, "My favorite season"

IggySuePea writes 11/22/97

Gold Star! orange commotion
fat faces sit on the ground
a pumpkin patch klatch

Cheryl Hine writes 11/21/97

Sorrow is a knife
Driven deep into your soul
Ripping and tearing

Jan van der Banck writes 11/21/97

Sky above the earth
Clouds drift towards highest heaven
Wind in the willows

Bach's a composer
Spritely music, somber hymns
The king of music

Ode to Long-Snapping writes 11/21/97

The punter should not
Need an eight-foot stepladder.
Good luck on waivers!

The poet comments, "If any of you long-snap, remember this haiku"

Here I stand helpless
Upside down, my clock is cleaned
I hate the noseguard

The poet comments, "This epitomizes the long-snapper"

Toast Point is completely baffled.

E. Grenier writes 11/21/97

God created all.
Dogs, rats, snakes, worms- after that,
men were redundant!

Thomas Lanier writes 11/20/97

Gold Star! Only bah humbugs
Who have no child within them
Ignore that first flake.

K.D. Koo writes 11/20/97

Seven babys good
fertilization drugs worked
God says you're now broke!

Gold Star! If you knew Susie
like I thought I knew Susie
now Susie's named Sid

K.D. Koo writes 11/20/97

Up up and away
in my beautiful balloon
Hindenburg was minor

Ivy writes 11/20/97

When the mists of time
tomorrow's haze revealing
through the shimmered moon

Misery and gloom
Deepest hearts rejected love
Clouds weep down my tears

The poet comments, "Wonderful page - a lot of time and effort evident."

Thank you! from Toast Point, the Sage and all the poets

Leonard Jeyam writes 11/19/97

harsh, the ripples on
the ancient pond; the mirrored
moon is disquieted

"Sappy" writes 11/19/97

oceans bubbles
popping around the seastar --
winter's saddest dream

Sarah with Eric writes 11/19/97

sun in green starlight
whip through fields of love luster
chased down the sidewalk

The poet comments, "wu-wei"

Anonymous writes 11/19/97

Haiku, haiku, hai
kuhai, kuhai, kuhai, ku
haiku, haiku, hai.

kuhai, kuhai, ku
haiku, haiku, haiku, HAI!
kuhai, kuhai, ku

Faustina writes 11/19/97

Gold Star! fat flakes melting on
bald pate of the college dean;
his black briefcase sweats.

Thomas Lanier writes 11/19/97

The chill wind blows free
Through branches that are now bare.
How cold the forest.

Bob Green writes 11/19/97

Gold Star! Instability.
Whose responsibility?
Uncle Sam's of course!

The rich aroma
Of her expensive perfume
Lost in ecstasy!!!

Kevin Drizen writes 11/18/97

"Spain's rain falls on plain"
Spain's plain is actually dry
Streisand must be wrong

Julie Andrews, perhaps? The thought of Barbra as Eliza Doolittle is rather frightening.

Vid Vukasovic writes 11/18/97

Gold Star! Little jade frogs
on my old coffee table
perhaps are dreaming

D.J. Vanden Langenberg writes 11/16/97

Gold Star! Winter's silent frost
like love gone frigidly cold
numbs the heart and soul.

Bobbi Pope writes 11/17/97

Blessed thorny leaf
Softly brush my tender cheek
You let my blood free

Running through steel wire
Leg up, leg down, body tires
I walk across clouds

Eaarendil writes 11/17/97

Brandon

year's last morning I
awake and then, only then
I smile and I know

The poet comments, "this poem represents the hope that each year will get better and better."

Maureen writes 11/16/97

Gold Star! Gentle sun-warmed breeze
full of just-awakened life
glides briskly onward

Footing grown unstable
by water flowing ice haloed
granite wakes

The poet comments, "99% of my haiku deal with nature and I try to be somewhat subtle"

Spring adventurer
tentatively on one foot
savoring new life

The poet comments, "I have been known to create at a snail's pace!"

Black linen feathers
house sharp-eyed watchman of the
arctic wonderland

The poet comments, "When it's spring in Alaska, the Ravens dance"

Nightmare of Your Dreams writes 11/15/97

black star burning dim
chance of survival so slim
supernova grim

lonely phoenix bird
bloody dagger through thy heart
fires burnt out of race

The poet comments, "13th hour, of the 13th day, 13th year now, i thrive for your comments, reply to me now"

small bird's lunch you are
taking on transformation
elegance so rare

The poet comments, "he wasn't eaten?!! *sigh* so sad, just like the ugly duckling,'cept he was old MacDonald's supper."

Gold Star! blue sea kissed by mist
calm, soothing, hypnotic waves
captivates the wind

The poet comments, "it's either the sky or the ocean that I wrote about. the truth is that it's about sky"

Shane D. Rymer writes 11/15/97

long in hammered groans
that closed to the sorrowed holes
formed true a promise

Thomas Lanier writes 11/15/97

Gold Star! October's palette
Gives way to November's gray.
December waits, white.

Dr. Richard Capella writes 11/14/97

snowflakes tumbling down
covering leaves in the woods
Oh my--it's winter

deer move through the trees
ballet in four-legged time
winter wonderland

examine and see
no two snowflakes are alike
a wonderful plan

grey clouds, crisp wind,snow
geese on high like arrows loosed
migratory flight

blood spots like red rubies
lie on snow where fox killed mouse
an age-old drama

The poet comments, "nice to be back"

Nice to have you!

Mika writes 11/14/97

Lenth Tallen nel Taas,
Lenth Techen Gerd ilt Kale . . .
Schaews nes mis Loeffel

The poet translates:
"Shadows ebb and flow,
Shadows eviscerate my mind's eye . . .
Dark yet not hostile"

Kevin Drizen writes 11/14/97

Gold Star! La cucaracha
la cucaracha baby
crunch crunch everywhere

Baby cries at night
mother's tired heart goes numb
love and fear are one

Child's view of the world
snowmen crayons beauty love
reality sucks

Take Stern off the air
Canadians humourless
scapegoat has been found

Brian Mason writes 11/14/97

Gold Star! Met someone today
She has that gentle beauty
That tugs at my heart

Linda Witlow writes 11/13/97

Chanting frog village
Celebrate the cool moonlight;
One is a poet.

The poet comments,
"Previous entry
Was a mistaken Key-stroke;
Not ever again! "

Toast Point mentions that he did not include the poet's first attempt, but was impressed with her form in the comment. Gold Star! Distant pond of glass;
With one impetuous stone
I disturb your calm.

The poet comments, " On 11-7-97 Louis Faber's haiku about a stone and a pond was published; here is mine (written long before I ran across his!)."

Matt Gauthier writes 11/13/97

The rose isn't red
It is only hanging dead
Like a broken heart

Vvid writes 11/13/97

slowly falling
an almost invisible
white rose petal

Thomas Lanier writes 11/13/97

Gold Star! Give me slanting rain.
Vertical rain but hastens
Each drop to its death.

Francesca Bean writes 11/13/97

Gold Star! Oh, Circus Peanut!
Autumn leaf cannot compare.
Thou art so very orange.

Hail the Great Pumpkin!
Most sagacious of seasons.
Linus still believes.

Gold Star! Ilgrim-pay ay-day.
uge-hay oronary-cay.
urkey-tay ad-bay.

Ross Weaver writes 11/11/97

The workings of mind
rising from and so unlike
the workings of Earth

The poet comments, "This is the first of a 3 stanza Haiku titled "Haiku Space". I wish there was room for all three."

There is! You just have to submit each verse separately, and include a comment telling me what you're doing.

Kevin Drizen writes 11/12/97

Two for one special
marked up one hundred percent
next time, it's wholesale

Gold Star! Where is the answer?
it is blow'in in the wind
there blows one right now!

Penny Merryfield writes 11/10/97

Glass sweat hot oven
Odor of pumpkin in air
Turkey being sliced.

Marine Parent writes 11/10/97

Here we go again!
FLASH! Desert Storm memories.
Finish off Saddam!

The poet comments, "For all of you who would blame former President Bush for this renewed flexing of Hussein's military muscle, remember this: President Bush and our allied heads of state carried out the United Nations' directive.....Some of us are so gung-ho to blame former leaders for Saddam's continued presence in world affairs...This time we need not commit until the UN says.....DO IT!"

C. Dawson writes 11/09/97

Gold Star! spring beckons new life
streams flowing like tides of time
I am lost in joy

The poet comments, "this is the first one i've written...i'm not used to boundaries.. it really made me think! i think i will practice this technique... "

D. C. Milford writes 11/08/97

Gold Star! Silent silver sand
Ebony silhouetttes of sage
Desert winter night

Louis Faber writes 11/07/97

the cranes fly upward
wings outstretched swallowing clouds
Eros sleeps fitfully

the stone knows no pain
falling to the pond's bottom
ripples comfort it

Kristin Rotondi writes 11/07/97

Autumn's beauty's seen.
A small child's senses are keen.
All's well with this scene.

Carol Anne Repsick writes 11/06/97

Gold Star! Mist creeping through pines
Leaves a veil of smoky grey
Sun brings life again

Thomas Lanier writes 11/06/97

Embers burn bright orange.
My friend against this cold night,
Warm me with your glow.

Collins7 writes 11/06/97

Gold Star! as silence holds sound,
as emptiness holds all text;
a darkness holds me

not the dark of night,
when mind's orbit of the soul;
fancies itself free

but, held by darkness,
as rich, black, velvet, a stone;
in a dark, dark, room

Detlef Gruber writes 11/06/97

free as free can be
free can be as can be free
be free as ye can

Marine Parent writes 11/06/97

He's my only son.
Today he is in the Marines.
FILO Semper Fi.

Send birthday greetings
Over two centuries old
The U S MARINES!

Yesterday we played.
Today we must labor on.
Tomorrow we sleep.

Emi Onozawa writes 11/05/97

Morning fish market
fresh caught tuna, yellowtail
Juxtaposition

Bring on Newton's Laws
Armed with graphing calculator
What was V-sub naught?

Mamba camouflaged
Deadly African tree snake,
Or pocketed candy?

Hop-Hopping Joey
Curious marsupial
He's so gosh darned cute!

Gold Star! Tea lovers unite.
Ginger-peach, or cinna-plum
Crumpets, anyone?

Babyfunk writes 11/05/97

Go fuck off and die
Kiss my ass motherfucker
paint your toenails red

El Hombre writes 11/05/97

Clavo al hombre.
Soy invisible a él.
él es hermoso.

The poet translates,
"I stare at the man.
I am invisible to him.
He is beautiful."

¡Canta! writes 11/05/97

Ave canora...
Sí, eres hermosita.
Canta, por favor.

The poet translates, "Musical bird...
yes, you are a beautiful little thing.
Please sing. "

Joven de bebé writes 11/05/97

Gold Star! Año tras año.
Puericia perdida.
Joven de bebé.

The poet translates,
"Year after year.
Childhood lost.
Young man from a baby. "

Courtney Mahler writes 11/05/97

Gold Star! I come in all shapes
I'm dark and love to follow you
I am your shadow

Sergei Braun writes 11/04/97

Lonely traveler
Hides under yellow raincoat
Yellow wind blows rain

Gold Star! Sleep well, my darling!
The sand of night is blowing
Over dunes of breasts.

Patricia Parsons-Beetschen writes 11/04/97

Gold Star! Willows sway gently.
Boughs conduct Fall's Symphony.
Winter's ear listens.

Children, gifts from God.
Lessons taught by gentle hand.
Teachers once and all.

In misted vision
loss is seen with clarity
but hearts have not eyes.

Penny Merryfield writes 11/04/97

Nut-hoarding squirrels
Branches and trunks look alike
Summer clothing gone

Bread cubes out drying
Planned dinner for pilgrim day
Pumpkin pie delight

Diamond Knight writes 11/04/97

Sliver of moon nights
Ghostly clouds move slowly by
What is my future?

A lamb lies in snow
Vulturous birds wait to kill
A collie stands guard

The poet comments, "This was inspired off of a print from the 1950's of a collie dog watching over a little lamb in the snow, and in the background there are black birds waiting to strike."

Birds singing sweet tunes
Flowers bursting with new hues
A new life for me

Gold Star! A knight on horseback
Raises his frosty sword high
Victory is won

Ibn Aswad writes 11/04/97

uncorrupted mind.
absolute oneness, essence.
division is false.

seeing I seek sight
reason becomes oppression
singularity.

hurricane winds blow
a smile unknown excites tears
the aftermath, fear.

Jonhurley writes 11/04/97

Dark skies
And autumn sunset
Glow like charcoal fires.

The poet comments, "Syllable rule doesn't have to be rigidly adhered to in English."

That's true, and has been the subject of much debate on this page.

Gold Star! Late autumn morning.
Even the sun hesitates
To come out early.

Thomas Lanier writes 11/03/97

Gold Star! October sheds them,
November sweeps them up, and
December hides them.

Gene Mariani writes 11/03/97

Harvest moon shines bright
Geese fly south in formation
Winter soon will come.

Clouds drift silently
Casting shadows on the ground
Cat sleeps peacefully

Cold November rains
Stripping soon dormant maples
Ready for winter.

Trelayna Tellazart writes 11/02/97

Little birds trickling
Through branches of a pine tree
Makes me long for wings.

Mumsy writes 11/02/97

Gold Star! capture the moment
by writing your haiku down
it's yours forever

Eva Starnes writes 11/01/97

transient gliders
Joseph's coat crisp underfoot
colorful in death

Kimberly R. Langston writes 11/01/97

Gold Star! I'll make witchy charms
Feed you cold red plums in bed
Save the slimy pits

Kevin Drizen writes 11/01/97

You make me complete
like a mustang roaming free
eternally mine

Moon glows in the night
your vast light is brighter still
lighting up my soul

Rain cold sadness pain
now you're gone I'm lonely still
spring awaits with hope

Gold Star! Your day will come soon
all things come to those who wait
ok I'm still waiting


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