Japanese

The
Toast Point
Haiku Contest!

A Japanese Garden of Verse

Entries from October, 1997


Joan Monahan writes 10/31/97

Gold Star! His gnarled hands knead dough
Made tender with the mixing
Love in every loaf.

The poet comments, "My father makes holiday bread every year. At the age of 91 it becomes more difficult, and he becomes more determined. What he cannot verbalize, he puts into every loaf. "

Cindy Ray writes 10/31/97

Saturday morning
cold, wet and rainy outside
I have a new book

Gold Star! In the autumn wind
Troupes of brown and yellow leaves
skipping and dancing

The poet comments, "I loved Graham's Monarch Butterfly haiku! Wonderful page.... "

Bob Green writes 10/31/97

Gold Star! Please, Don't be AFRRAID!
I vant to bite your sveet neck
OOPS, you're not my type.

Transylvania
The capitol of the Count
Dracula by name!

Which witch is which witch
The black cat was so confused
Biting of her head.

The great Frankenstein
Many so misunderstood
Still lives in the dark.

The poet comments, "BOO!"

Thomas Lanier writes 10/30/97

Gold Star! Walk with me at dusk.
Let the warmth of our clasped hands
Chide the dying sun.

Matthew Rodbro writes 10/29/97

Winter shiver, deep sky
passion amidst mortal girth
sickly whisper of hope

Mary White writes 10/29/97

Kites in bright July
Break through the line of the hill
Magician's tulips

The poet comments, "This is a great site! Thank you for accepting my submission."

Rebecca Coleman writes 10/29/97

Sparrow plunged to earth
a BB through its heart
I watch in silence.

Evan MacDonald writes 10/28/97

The wind is blowing
through the trees in the forest,
whistling a song

The snow is falling
coloring everything white,
masking ugliness.

The wind is blowing,
swirling snowflakes around me,
making me dizzy.

The sun is rising,
shining a brilliant light,
destroying shadows.

Pumpkins and candy,
ghosts, ghouls, goblins, and monsters.
Happy Halloween!

I swing mightily
sending the ball up skyward,
only to splash down.

The poet comments, "This Haiku is about golf."

Rick Lurding writes 10/28/97

Gold Star! A butterfly lands.
"Drawn by the skin's salt" you say.
Not salt but spirit.

The poet comments, "hope you like it."

John Mulder, the Netherlands writes 10/28/97

Monotonous sound
from the steady dripping tap
it's raining outside

The first mother's milk
is flower's nectar alike
sweet sucking sounds

Along the choppy sea
beautiful foamy collars
a nice glass of beer

Gold Star! White and naked bumps
the chestnut on the woodland
loosed his hush too soon

Harley Orr writes 10/27/97

disturbed silence
a ripple in the water
sigh of my love.

wild grass bends
wind blows through
water changes course too.

a mud-stained
feather wears my soul
once the wind blowed.

ah writes 10/27/97

Gold Star! Is it a rule------------------------Who made this rule
that you have to try your hand------A lover of tradition?
at writing haiku--------------------or its prisoner?

The poet comments, "just messin' around"

Vinnie the Face writes 10/27/97

"oct" in october
means "8," but october is
the 10th month. How come?

Toast Point knew the answer to this once. And "Nov" means 9 and "Dec" means 10.

Anonymous writes 10/27/97

Schizophrenic soul
flawless characters, perfect
growing close as one

Dussler writes 10/27/97

Winter approaching
I'm dreaming of warmer times
Times I spent with you

Brian Mason writes 10/27/97

Snowflakes drifting down
One falls on my outstretched tongue
I'm a kid again

The poet comments, "Ah, simple pleasures....:)"

Josh writes 10/26/97

Gold Star! Twiggy, my love wench
Capture my heart like you do
I'm so insane. yes

Toast Point writes 10/26

Forty-Two today
Another year for Wumpus
Happy birthday, love!

Eric Sapp writes 10/25/97

unseen stars
chattering wisdom
behind violet clouds

Anonymous writes 10/25/97

two cigarette butts
lying in the golden leaves
smoke is racing home

Vinnie the Face writes 10/25/97

Snickers and Reeses
We are their possessions now
Happy Halloween

Penny Merryfield writes 10/24/97

Gold Star! Flickering flame yellow
Bright Halloween moon yellow
Monster eyes yellow!

Rachel A. Mortis writes 10/24/97

night falls - I, sleeping,
dream of you with nothing on
but the radio.

EAF writes 10/23/97

dream of September
wild indigo heavens lit
by the Milky Way

D.J. Vanden Langenberg writes 10/23/97

Seashells filled with sand,
Water lapping at the shore,
Beauty to behold.

Clouds filled with raindrops
waiting to fall to the ground
replenishing Earth.

Fierce wind's strong anger
can destroy all in its path
leaving pain behind.

Seasons changing but
green trees living all year long
continue to grow.

Thomas Lanier writes 10/23/97

Gold Star! October's first frost;
Translucent foreshadow of
Winter's waiting snow.

Penny Merryfield writes 10/22/97

Warm sunshine yellow
Sips of lemonade yellow
Catch beachball yellow.

The poet comments, "Just found your site, and I love haiku. Thought I'd give it a try."

Silver Surfer writes 10/22/97

Australian spring
watching flower blossoms fall
ah! human nature

Kristin Rotondi writes 10/22/97

Darkness invades all.
Winter's frost spares no place in her vast path.
Only spring conquers.

Tina McDonald writes 10/22/97

Out of public eye
People seem to disappear
Angry and hopeless

Icy Autumn wind
The yellow of the great moon
Will all disappear

Yellow umbrellas
The sound of rain pouring down
Cold autumn morning

In Washington state
The rain falls consistently
Day in and day out

The forests are filled
From mountains to the valley
Multi-colored trees

Gold Star! As I walk to school
I am drenched from head to toe
God bless Washington

The water seems calm
Yet below is turbulent
I'm deceived again

Joan Monahan writes 10/22/97

Passage

Bubbling ever like a brook
Words cascading over lips
Child became woman.

The poet comments, "It reminds me of my daughter."

Oneness

Strength in every word
Eyes filled with unspoken love
He was her equal.

The poet comments, "How I felt about a couple at a recent wedding ceremony. "

andy writes 10/22/97

Drowning in ego --------------------Liberated man
human rips in two at death----------rides the universal breath
extremely painful-------------------sails free at death

The poet comments, "Didn't know how to submit two that go together, hence - what you see. Didactic? Yes. But perhaps some truth."

Vinnie the Face writes 10/22/97

Needles in candy?
What the hell is wrong with you?
I don't get your joke

Gold Star! Halloween, only
time of year when people can
be who they want to

Manjaro writes 10/22/97

Sweet Seattle rain!
Golden leafs beneath gray skies.
Halloweth be ye!

Bob Green writes 10/22/97

Gold Star! Leaves falling slowly,
Like the hair on my pillow,
Winter is coming.

What was once thick brown
Is slowly turning to gray
Thinning more each day.

Another wrinkle
A day older it appears
The countdown begins.

Gee, Bob, just had a birthday, or what?

Joe Shoe writes 10/21/97

quiet morning hunt
a noisy squirrel announces
the mute intruder

Wa Koo writes 10/21/97

a crow calls
Caw! Caw! Caw!
the others answer

David Mark Dannov writes 10/21/97

In an old, thirsty
desert, a single flower
squirts yellow and red.

The poet comments, "Let me know what you think."

Thomas Lanier writes 10/20/97

The spiders have been
My friends all the summer long;
Now, just shredded webs.

Kaelan James Smith writes 10/20/97

Low in the water
slippery upon the rocks
down upon the sand

Hard, cold, and heavy
steely surface does shine brightly
still and is lifeless

Jill Cline writes 10/18/97

hard October frost
pink clematis etched in white
garden's almost gone.

backlit by blue
quick slash of fiery velvet
proud cardinal flies

hollow, knocking taps
two woodpeckers excavate
by the marshy pond

Gold Star! white thistledown floats
soundlessly in crisp Fall air
by my hidden blind.

Thomas Lanier writes 10/17/97

Juxtaposition
Bizarre! Halloween next to
Christmas in the stores.

Toast Point writes 10/17/97

A week in Newark
Training lawyers on software
Oh joy! Oh rapture!

Over Halloween
They send me back to Philly
Though I'd left for good

Then Chicago-bound
The week before Thanksgiving
Hope it's not too cold

Rather than being a convenient diversion that supplies him with rent money, Toast Point's career is draining his life-force more and more quickly...

Mrs. Browning writes 10/16/97

Gold Star! Fast, Efficient, Smart
Eating bagels at her desk,
She processes words

The poet comments, "I'm an actress. I type for a living at a PR firm in NYC. My life IS a study in Haiku! :-)"

KPNewell writes 10/16/97

Gold Star! Greetings, same coldness.
Remember your chill so well.
So- We meet once more...

The poet comments, "Where did my summer go??"

Witches moon so high.
Painted on October's sky.
Spirits passing by...

Gold Star! Choices...Decisions.
So much sight beyond vision.
Voices mean little.

The poet comments, "Life is good..."

V.C.R.'s on pause-
Push the play button once more.
The movie rolls on...

The poet comments, "Funny how that works, huh?!"

Don Wiggins writes 10/16/97

The northern heavens
Dancing particles of ice
Reflecting sunlight

Wondering writes 10/16/97

The mountain stands tall
Towering over mankind;
Still it cannot run.

Fantasy BBS writes 10/16/97

The willow stands by
a sparkling blue pond,
quiet and peaceful.....

Goofy writes 10/15/97

At work late, no date
Red hair, white teeth, blue feelings
Last day with Penny

Penny audits us
At midnight, singing show tunes
Combing her red hair

Graham Miles writes 10/15/97

Gold Star! Monarch stumbles south
Reeling like a happy drunk.
Autumn frost pursues.

The poet comments, "Composed after watching the monarch butterflies migrate."

Rebecca Coleman writes 10/14/97

For you my tears fall
Like white flower petals in-
to the blackest sea.

The poet comments, "This is about pain that goes unrecognized by others."

Da Genius writes 10/13/97

I approach the gap
And pop a 360 flip
I land really clean

The poet comments, "just say no "

Gold Star! I love beer with fries
It tastes very beautiful
Sometimes I dunk them

Cesar writes 10/13/97

old man with knowlege
life passes like a journey
so I acknowledge

Ryan writes 10/13/97

Speckled trout fighting
Pulling, jumping, making runs
Thirty-four-inch fish

Joann writes 10/13/97

His handsome brown eyes
Twinkle in the evening sky
I think he loves me

Raj Alexander writes 10/13/97

To a Chrysalis

caterpillar in
your changing room come out and
show off your new clothes

Linda J. Adams writes 10/12/97

Ghosts and goblins rule
Crisp leaves blowing in the wind
This October eve.

The poet comments, "Thank you for having such a fine place to share the art and love for haiku. " Gold Star!

Geese in formation
Silhouette in autumn sky
Funnel down to feed.

The poet comments, "Thank you for the contest,is there a limit of haiku that we can submit?"

No!

Elena Koulich writes 10/12/97

Gold Star! still town, crycified
with sleepless roads under snow
new morning begins

Brian Mason writes 10/12/97

Gold Star! Sitting in my class
Staring at the mountaintops
Snow begs me to skip

My Sweet Destiny writes 10/10/97

Spook the ghosts who come
Welcome freaks into our home
Just be yourself now

We're here every day
Just to be gone tomorrow
As the cold wind blows

Leslie writes 10/10/97

I lost a close friend
Misery, grief, and sadness
Rest In Peace, Javier

The poet comments, "In memory of Javier Quintanilla"

Walter Phillips writes 10/10/97

NineteenForty Merc
Chop Top, Side Spots, Step Side Pipes
Dussler has a dream

The poet comments, "This is my teacher's dream car"

Alleycat writes 10/10/97

Witches and black cats
A stormy night is scary
He suddenly dies

The poet comments, "GOTHIC PEOPLE RULE"

Leslie writes 10/10/97

White rose all alone
Raindrops shedding like sad tears
This is how I feel

Lion writes 10/10/97

Waves crashing on rocks
sea breeze, blowing on my face
seagulls watching me.

Dussler writes 10/10/97

Udell moves, shakes, bakes,
shucks, jives, shoots- Nothing but the
bottom of the net.

The poet comments, "Where is the U-man?"

Big Beep writes 10/10/97

The ball swishes through
the net as the buzzer sounds.
Yes! Rockets blast Jazz.

Kevin Tyson writes 10/10/97

Tyson, strong, tough, quick,
The former heavyweight champ
forty five and three

REBEL writes 10/10/97

The moonshine is bright
High in the sky with the stars
Moon lies beyond earth

Ed Kittel writes 10/09/97

Gold Star! Billiant flecks of gold
Sun dancing on the water
Pebbles in a stream

Tall and sturdy stalks,
Colors dripped from God's palette,
Stately hollyhocks.

Carolina Ore writes 10/09/97

Animals are great
They make anyone feel good
I love animals

Life is a journey
It must have bad AND good
Life is very fair

Cyrax writes 10/09/97

White train rushing fast,
Bright green fields glow as we pass,
White train rushing slow.

Walter Phillips writes 10/09/97

Hot Rods and Street Rods
The big engines and loud pipes
Make my heart rate race

Laurel writes 10/09/97

November darkness
slinks past glimmers; silvery
moon on my hushed lake

Robert Laney Esquire writes 10/09/97

Death walks among us
Hideous and horrible
Looks like my sister

Halloween is here
Evil roams free on this night,
the night of the dead

The poet comments, "this is cool"

Ricardo writes 10/09/97

I'm very lonely
I have no one to talk to
I can love again.

Lion writes 10/08/97

Death, watching my moves
waiting to take me off earth
coming for my soul.

The poet comments, "I thought it would be cool to talk about a serious topic and not make it depressing."

Bears, hiding in caves
Winter, putting them to sleep
snow, covering them.

The poet comments, "I love Winter."

Emi Onozawa writes 10/07/97

Snow white button peeks
fruiting body, death cap rise
always stands alone

Gold Star! Sushi glistens bright
Under moonlit nights with thee
sweet gift from the sea

Bing comes rushing in
Headache, pain, and P.M.S.
Bing goes rushing out

The antlion reigns
Skillful trap a death for ants
Small, round depression

Kimberly R. Langston writes 10/04/97

Gold Star! Vapors from the grass
Swirl around my chaste bare feet
Witness of my weight

Emi Onozawa writes 10/03/97

gentle lacewing sways
breeze of August, speck of green
taken by a frog

Gold Star! Weary cranefly rests
not knowing, on an anthill
gives a life for life

The poet comments, "bugs are beautiful"

Bill Swartz writes 10/03/97

Gold Star! puffball flakes of snow
across my eyes gently float
land softly sighing

Dolphin Leaps
smiling at the sun
back to sea

The poet comments, "3,5,3 haiku "

Greg Mills writes 10/02/97

she said that her pen
wasn't working the pen said
that it was dying

The poet comments, "Originally called Master & Slave. Overheard in a crowded room from a woman violently shaking her pen. Heard the pen's exhausted reply above the noise of glasses and cutlery. I couldn't take my eyes off her until she finally put it down on the table. "

Thomas Lanier writes 10/02/97

When autumn is late,
The colors that lift my soul
Test my memory.

Chelsea Dauber writes 10/01/97

Misty morning day
Encloses me silently
Clouds cover the sun.

Rain falls like the tears
off a child's chin, despairing
moments turn to joy.

LaToshuwa D. Andrus writes 10/01/97

Gold Star! Toasty friend above
Show your shining light below
Warm my light brown skin

The poet comments, " Every poem doesn't have to make sense. As long as it has life."

Brian Mason writes 10/01/97

Gold Star! Friends say I'm foolish
One in a million succeed
I will make it two!

The poet comments, "My dream is to be a singer, and I'm going to follow it...:)"

Bravo!


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