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The Toast Point
Haiku Contest!

A Japanese Garden of Verse

Entries from September, 1996



Carl Sweetnam writes 09/30/96

Seven already!
The sky darkens while sun sets.
A leaf's turn to fall.

Jeremy Thorne writes 09/30/96

open journal
final entry
today I died

The poet comments, "This poem was inspired by much pain and grief over the past few years of my life combined with a story from the civil war."

Josh Berry writes 09/30/96

Gold Star! Dipping your toes
The rippling water
Broken perfection

Gold Star! Talking on the phone
I hear a beep. "Hold on, 'k?"
On. Off. On. "Hello?"

Aiko writes 09/26/96

Gold Star! Autumn emerges
from the hot womb of summer
The trees shake with joy

The tree shadows dance
to the rhythm of the wind
all day and all night

Mother Nature heals
ill flesh and ill souls on Earth
Respect her wisdom

The Earth ate the sun
and all the marshmallow clouds
Now it is nighttime

Norma Jean Carter writes 09/24/96

Gold Star! Hot and thirsty, I
drink the sweet iced tea and
honeysuckle air.

Rico Moose writes 09/23/96

Gold Star! Falling needles knife
The ground as Pinetrees prepare
To withstand winter

The poet comments, " A little autumnal alliteration"

Noel Kaufmann writes 09/23/96

Behold the ego
Set in glowing emptiness
On the edge of time

Young Republican
Finger writhing up his nose
It's Izod Lacoste!

Gold Star! Springtime, sharp and clean
Mountains have their eloquence
Promulgating green

I think I would like
To have something of a snack
Baked beans would be nice

Mako Otsuji writes 09/21/96

Death is a banker
Everyone has to pay now
Now, any questions?

Laur writes 09/20/96

Gold Star! Rising in the air
butterflys eclipse the sun
stained glass wings in flight

Brujo sets the scene
faithful, stoic penitent
waits for medicine

Crooked stony teeth
rise up sharp to meet the stream
falling through the air

Dawn illuminates
soft green bed for serein's child
dew-drop on a leaf

Ken CooK writes 09/20/96

Butterflies dancing,
Tossed gently by currents of air,
Wings like eyelashes.

Thomas Lanier writes 09/20/96

Return, oh my heart
To love and nature. Disturb
Not the fair garden.

The poet comments, "I submitted this one previously. Was it misplaced or rejected?"
Toast Point responds, "No submitted entries are rejected. We either didn't get it or we misplaced it (quite possible). Our apologies."

Laur writes 09/17/96

Gold Star! Jewels of green and blue
treacherously sparkling cool
in a spider's eye

Scorching lover sun
warms the skin with kisses hot
hedonistic dreams

Gold Star! Sharpened harpoons fly
red blood stains barnacled flukes
swan-song of the whales

Yucatan at Night

Sky forest of stars
holusbolus they ignite
like a battle cry

The poet comments, " What a great page! I love reading everyone's haiku! "
Toast Point grins in reply, "Welcome aboard!".

Collins7 writes 09/17/96

pull the plug on thought,
set flowing its endless stream;
purify the mind

I believe that God
is bigger than the cages;
thatıs beyond belief

the way to the truth
is by way of emptiness;
all lies are empty

throw a Zen party,
invite the very Buddha;
kill him, gentle soul

I am here, not still
I am not here and at rest;
unseen quark's message

at peace with chaos,
joy, uncertainty, doubt;
love's not far away

John Mulder, the Netherlands writes 09/17/96

Nelson Mandela
Prisoner and President
Front page news always

Gold Star! Two elderly men
slow down their tortoise pace
a woman goes by

Gold Star! Foggy strings foaming
around my holiday-cottage
where I expected sun.

Ken CooK writes 09/16/96

Gold Star! Sun on horizon
Whisps of clouds of amber hues
I feel the stillness

Deserted margin
Sand clutching warm tidal pool
As peace offering.

F. A. Mondo writes 09/15/96

Gold Star! the chrysanthemum
burning golden red morning
drink the rising sun

Kristie writes 09/15/96

Gold Star! Take mine, it's for free
One of a kind, only mine
Sweet virginity

Laurene P. Milder writes 09/15/96

Gold Star! One strand parachute
on the wind a spider rides
trailing gossamer

Golden sun streams in
leaves of shadow on the rug
flutter in the breeze

Gold Star! Autumn red leaves twirl
northern crispness smells like snow
woodsmoke conjures home

Slowly shuffling sow
sidesteps squealing suckling sons
seeking shade's sweet sleep

Erin Dowe writes 09/14/96

Snowflakes falling down
Landing softly on my tongue
I can feel it melt

Lightning is flashing
Thunder crying by its side
Frightened creatures hide

Collins7 writes 09/14/96

Lao Tse
nothing ventured
nothing gained

The poet comments, "These were the last syllables in my syllable box. I am going to buy some more."

to each one four verbs:
to love, know, have and to be;
entrepreneurism

Gold Star! Alvin Toffler coined:
"the battle for men's minds"
which side are you on?

love each haiku writ,
as each drop of gentle rain;
a river flowing

last night, the golf green,
carried two ardent lovers;
plush magic carpet

Kivas Fajo writes 09/11/96

Dear Sage, what has
happened to my haikus which
I sent last week?

A disconcerted Sage responds

We received none, sir
Possibly we misplaced them?
Send them again, please...

Gary Wederspahn writes 09/11/96

Held by the strong roots,
Boulders lifted by the wind
When the tree blew down.

Gold Star! We're dead and alive
Like Schrodinger's hapless cat.
Don't open that box!

The poet comments, "This Haiku is based on a famous thought experiment in quantum physics."

Collins7 writes 09/11/96

Gold Star! controversy sparks
debate, debate nurtures doubt
honest doubt kills creeds

The Sage suggests switching the first and second sentences to completely encapsulate each thought on a separate line.

illusion, vision
unrealistic, mystic
dreamer or dreamer?

genetic river,
or genetic tree, which serves
metaphorically?

genetic river
to its sea, genetic tree,
from its roots; which one?

how to measure you?
me? me, you? you, me? us, we?
elastic ruler

Gold Star! one recently wrote
a haiku that touched my heart
I carry it now

Lovena writes 09/10/96

Gold Star! At a foggy lake
where the fishes used to dance
there I stood alone

The poet comments, "I wrote this when I was 10 years old."

Dale writes 09/10/96

Gold Star! Poetry just is.
Its appreciation is
The real miracle

Dusty Archives writes 09/09/96

A blanket of snow
Cradling a bowl of hot tea
The world in my hands

Gold Star! From the cherry tree
Falls a petal on the breeze -
Oh! A butterfly!

Rico Moose writes 09/07/96

Gold Star! The rain sounds made by
Trucks run down my window's glass,
Loud puddles on panes

Liquid faces drip
From my mind's cliff, yet wear no
Holes in my stone heart

Kathy Grover writes 09/05/96

a rose with one thorn
consumed by a wildebeest
yet blood is drawn first

Gold Star! Hope, like small embers,
Burns strong, hotter and brighter
Just before dying

a bird, left for dead
rises from the leaves and rocks
then suddenly sinks

a proud and bright sun
a burst of warm alpenglow;
then a dark blanket

Gold Star! tender green tendrils
sweetly winding together:
tenacity, strength

a spirit falters,
another touches the heart:
two spirits take wing

The poet comments, "How is this for a first attempt at poetry by a C.P.A.? I had sudden inspiration and sat down and wrote 6 of these. Should I quit or think up more?"
Toast Point responds, "More, more! Not to scare you, but my Wumpus works for the AICPA..."

Collins7 writes 09/05/96

reader and writer,
locked in effort's uphill climb;
toward understanding

Gold Star! "Life's Little Drama,"
with Igor played by Ego,
Frankenstein, by Self

the mind elastic,
a venturi tube for thought;
constipation stinks

Thomas Lanier writes 09/03/96

The safest sanctum
In the universe should be
In the mother's womb.

The poet comments, "Is it acceptable for a haiku to be about a controversial subject?"
The Sage replies, "Yes, as long as you accept responsibility for any responses."

F. A. Mondo writes 09/03/96

Gold Star! More ancient than sand
Or the story of the oceans
White snow on black rock

J. Bob Green writes 09/03/96

She wore her worries
Like badges of honor earned
Life, rife with battles.

The poet comments, "There are several things not to be wasted: Life: a vapor; Knowledge: a fleeing thought; and Time: a reminder."

Collins7 writes 09/02/96

I think if I think
of her, I think if I pray
for her, don't you think?

one common mother,
one common genetic chain;
inseparably bound

each thought a vector,
its resultant's bearing true;
welcome to chaos

man is, and is not
thought; which does imprison or
set free; two-edged sword

no clear beginning
to no clear end, what a trip;
much like space travel

Gold Star! haiku brevity
is misleading, its timeless
message, eternal

Daniel writes 09/01/96

Gold Star! When our lips and tongues
Embrace and dance the tango,
Waves of passion swell.

The poet comments, "Come visit Daniel-San's Hall of Haikus at http://www.wam.umd.edu/~dar/poems.html. I hope the Sage allows for shameless plugging and self-promotion."

The Sage bows. Toast Point will include the hall in the list of other haiku sites on the Greeting Page.

David Shull writes 09/01/96

Friends along a log
Watch a cosmic visitor
As waves lap the shore

The poet comments, "Composed while viewing a comet in mid-March from Crane's Beach, MA."

Eric Sapp writes 09/01/96

Cardinal stares me down
from his righteous perch
I avoid his helpful eyes

running backwards through
a field of dirt and questions
not knowing - almost hoping to trip

tourists call out with glee
"Look, a dolphin!" I always turn
too late and miss believing


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