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The Toast Point Haiku Contest!

Entries from
April 1996


Mark Hickler writes 04/30/96

Gold Star! Full of summer hay
A wagon sways ready to fall
On some grateful horse

The writer comments:
"Driving on a highway I saw a flatbed truck full of bales of hay. It was overloaded and slightly tipping. What could be a human disaster could be unbelievable blessing from another viewpoint."

Praxis writes 04/30/96

Haiku, how are you,
Words no rhyme to reason out,
Thoughts to pique your doubt.

The writer comments: "What words can be spoken to ever say enough?"

J. Bob Green writes 04/30/96

The clouds left plenty
The ground most saturated
And the rain returns.

The writer comments: "Although one cannot turn off the faucet of nature, one can absorb and use more than one thinks."

Ed Doseby writes 04/28/96

Apogee sunlight,
Eyes tired from window's glare,
Unable to see.

Silence billows,
With no reply, from
Mouth today.

Itinki Khan writes 04/27/96

"You huff and puff, dear.
It's hard to keep up, though Hugh
Heffner's my name. Whew!"

Toast Point writes 4/28

Intrigued and disturbed
By recipe: Joy of Cooking
Homemade marshmallows?

Mako Otsuji writes 04/26/96

The Good and the Evil
A neverending battle
Who do I fight for?

Snaffoo writes 04/26/96

Gold Star! Black and silent world
From a dull agate eye
Dusky pearls fall

Rebel writes 04/26/96

Who left this tuna
In my fridge to rot, turn green?
Smelly fishy go!

Mako Otsuji writes 04/25/96

How can I trust you?
You betrayed us all, hurt us
My soul is bleeding

He stepped on a cat
She suffocated a cat
I just sat and watched

Gold Star! Black cat, thirteen floors
I walked under the ladder
A mistake, I scream

My head is throbbing
Everything toppled on me
The ladder was gone

General Mayhem writes 04/25/96

Everyone's crazy
Under (with some) a show of
Take-charge and sangfroid.

Matchmaker writes 04/25/96

I've waited so long
Where am I placed in your life?
Deep inside your heart.....

I look left and right
I'm blinded by your false words
Do you really care?

Mako Otsuji writes 04/25/96

Denied for so long -
Will our love surface again?
He's gone forever

Craig Wilcox writes 04/25/96

Wind blows through the trees
Blue birds fly happily off
Leaves float in the wind

Lowntlee Mackintosh writes 04/25/96

Elvis Costello
Sang "Accidents Will Happen".
Then I broke my leg!

Lowntlee Mackintosh writes a double 04/25/96

Gold Star! The phone rings three times.
The answering machine says
"I'm not there" it lies

My sister-in-law -
"I will speak to you later"
But she lies as well!

and a single...

Sheringham Beach is
The best place to see crab boats
Coming in sideways

Mako Otsuji writes 04/24/96

Love comes quickly now
My cry slices through the air
Our love is over

Brandon Wilson writes 04/24/96

The beutiful tree
A gift from Mother Nature
Yet, man cuts it down

Lowntlee Macintosh writes 04/24/96

The train thunders past
Tree stumps and men with chainsaws.
No leaves on the line.

The Sage comments: very nice for a first!

Myotis Brown writes 04/24/96

Gold Star! Under your fingers
The nectarines drop their skins
Like pale silk boxers

Klaus Troff, O.B.E. writes 04/23/96

Gold Star! Protected sex - like
Sucking a candy still wrapped
Up in cellophane.

Libby Rashid writes 04/23/96

Unprotected sex -
Like eating British beef, but
With quicker results.

Kivas Fajo writes 04/23/96

I asked a few friends
About this Geisha. Some said she
Would never bring it

Far with this vacuous
Look on her face. She should, at
Least, LOOK clever.

Others, however, fell for
This "heavenly stupid face",
As they put it.

I, for my part, do
Not understand this discussion
About a woman long dead.

The Sage comments: Long dead?

Leveller writes 04/23/96

Remember: Comfort
The afflicted, and afflict
The comfortable.

Solly Bate writes 04/22/96

Gold Star! Return to the womb?
Not me! I'm not going back
In whole or in part.

Namako writes 04/22/96

Gold Star! Spring's faint signs - like a
Stubborn wife's wan smile after
Long, sullen silence.

Peter Fasnacht, esq. writes 04/21/96

Lawnmowered rose patch
Lowered to its final form:
Beauty through life's pain

Bare twig in winter-
Ugly, brittle, useless mind.
Even spring seems cold.

Rhapsodomantic
Words like the calling of geese
Before Winter's chill

Hope silences me -
Sparrow silent when she eats;
She: food for my soul

Gold Mist writes 04/21/96

Is this a geisha?
Looks more like a tired housewife
Doomed to fan the air.

Toast Point responds:
A friend of Toast Point
Asked if the pictured geisha
Was a man in drag?

Amber writes 04/20/96

Bewildered, yet calm
The goldfish seeks food and light
But it is not near...

Nancy Ayash writes 04/19/96

Patch of green velvet
Sprinkled with red polka-dots
Ripe apple orchard

Kivas Fajo writes 04/19/96

It is quite curious:
Since some time, I donīt miss her.
Springtime, may be.

Gold Star! She, who was once the
Main part of my life, aqua
Vitae of mine existence.

Dear Sage: The Geisha
Looks good, but what on earth do
The inscriptions mean?

Wise is the Sage here,
But Japanese Characters?
Kivas asks too much!

Galaxies writes 04/18/96

The blur of light fills
The sky like a bowl of light
The final frontier.

Wolves in the Wilderness write 04/18/96

In the wilderness
The wolves are howling for food
Nobody will help.

Texas writes 04/18/96

Gold Star! Sun like hot lava
Huge blueberry-colored clouds
Make the evening sky.

Maria Von Tramppe writes 04/18/96

The hills are alive
With the sweet sound of music
Nazis will come soon.

Hopalong writes 04/17/96

Gold Star! Does a God exist?
As working hypothesis
I'll take 'yes' - beats 'no'.

Toast Point writes 04/17/96

Testing graphics now
Japanese geisha on fan
Will users like it?

Sienje writes 04/16/96

Gold Star! Through the suffering,
beyond and below extremes---
the Song's always sung!

Lapsoapso writes 04/14/96

On a walk round the
Block, hyperventillating,
My dogma dropped dead.

Cornucopia writes 04/14/96

When young, I used socks,
Gloves; Mom's fur coat stood up by
Itself - no hangers.

Anthro... writes 04/12/96

Gold Star! Life seem meaningless?
Ask what your cat thinks. See it
Afresh through green eyes.

BarnDance writes 04/12/96

Your cow's gone dry, and
You don't know why? You should both
Listen to Mozart.

Manny Festo writes 04/11/96

Gold Star! More powerful means
More observed means less free means
No satisfaction.

Mako Faye Otsuji writes 04/11/96

Life is a crystal
Humans, the children of God
Happy, until fate....

Nancy Ayash writes 04/11/96

Gold Star! Droning honey bees
Labor in summer meadow
Frenzy and stillness

Holofernes writes 04/10/96

Change 'Altruism'
To 'Alfalsism' - boost Truth
In Advertising.

Kivas Fajo writes 04/10/96

Standing knee-deep in
Thawed slime; wearing costumes for
Hunting Easter eggs.

Gold Star! It was cold and raw,
My nose ran; I stumbled oft, but
Found thirty-six eggs!

Later on, shivering
And febrile, I came to know:
Ted had found forty!

Coolaung writes 04/09/96

Near distant cold roads
Flies by larger trees than I
My well-fed hunter

Gold Star! Two cats, red and black,
Whining for their morning gruel
Weave within my way

on na no hito
kireina umi ni
shima ga imas

Well past painful dawn
Five birds twitter endlessly
Outside my window

Gold Star! On pretty pink lips
Velvet butterfly kisses
Wet a quivered sigh

Lenny writes 04/09/96

Gold Star! A roadside begger
Smoothly catches the orange
Tossed from a cab

Arthur Dent writes 04/09/96

Ecstatically
Reaches for the red button
Of a reindeer's nose.

Newborn cries, clutching
Eagerly to suckle warmth
From her ripened breast.

Marks on his collar
From her lips - blood-red - ling-
er on his knuckles.

When true friends part in
The mind memories like great
Bells reverberate.

Holidayer writes 04/08/96

After nightfall, a
Rosary of cottage lights
Agleam round the bay.

Beneficiary writes 04/08/96

Though flesh is grass, it
Leaves cast-iron frying pans
As memory-joggers.

Filial son writes 04/08/96

Mom's bridal photo:
Only one I've seen with smoke-
Emitting nostrils.

Hairdresser writes 04/08/96

Gold Star! Blondes DO have more fun:
How many brunettes d'you see
With blonde roots showing?

Attorney writes 04/08/96

"I clocked you at two
Hundred an hour!" "Didn't plan
To be out that long."

Rover writes 04/06/96

Gold Star! "BREAKFAST ANYTIME"
So I chose flapjacks during
The Enlightenment.

Toast Point writes 4/6

Gradually perky
Saturday sipping coffee
Brewed by my Wumpus.

Einstein writes 04/05/96

As simple as can
Be, but no simpler. Got that,
Modigliani?

Holdout writes 04/05/96

"All right, all right, I'll
Butt out" [Inhale] Heaven, I
Hope, still allows you.

The Grocer writes 04/05/96

As firm and fibrous
As a coconut, and as
Hard to crack open.

Onlooker writes 04/05/96

Gold Star! Coffee shop clerk smiles
At child, her face muscles tweaked
By her ovaries.

Neglected writes 04/05/96

One-tracked in her quest
For the holy crewel, she
Was wholly cruel.

Slicker writes 04/05/96

New York, the city
That never sleeps! (Why? because
They're afraid to sleep.)

Uxorious writes 04/05/96

Pearl, don't harbour a
Grudge....Turn down the Trinitron
And listen to me!

El Toro writes 04/05/96

Gold Star! Gore Vidal? I wish!
But so far only his works
Have entered the ring.

The apostate writes 04/05/96

Gold Star! Good Friday again.
Bach's music dissolves hard hearts,
Erodes disbelief.

Kazumi writes 04/04/96

"It's nothing to look
At," she said to the faces
So strained and intent.

Oistrakh writes 04/03/96

Cello Concerto
In G, multo fuoco:
One fingers, one bows.

Kivas Fajo writes 04/03/96

I saw you dancing
With him last night. The dance-floor:
My heart. It still hurts.

Dear Sage, do I have
To print my address every time
I send a haiku?

The Sage replies:

Including address
Once per batch of your haikus
Is helpful to us.

Really, once a month
(The first haiku of the month)
Is quite sufficient.

Make sure, however,
That you check off the "Link Me"
Portion of the form.

Majolica writes 04/02/96

For all his sins with
Others' wives, unknown, X does
Penance in his own.

Hakimoto writes 04/02/96

Who's that third I see
Walking beside you. I thought
We two were alone.

Automoto writes 04/02/96

Gold Star! Prince Andrew: "Hi, Koo."
"No time for verse." "Look, I'm Stark."
"Hey, cool! Then let's screw."

Nixon writes 04/02/96

Gold Star! Haahvud on the Chaahles -
Who can forget - or regret -
The Kennedy voice.

Michael R. Gates writes 04/02/96

Gold Star! Eyes light and heart hums
And Cogito, ergo sum
By flipping a switch.

..with quarks unfettered,
into quiv'ring superstrings
my being dissolves...

Conifer writes 04/02/96

Nerve impulses no
Longer jump the synapses.
The leg moves no more.

Furtively the boy
Looks over his shoulder. All
Is clear - he eats snow.

DR ? writes 04/02/96

pLACE ONE GLOVED hanD
UPON YOUR HEART aNd ProMISE
Of ETernAL loVE.

Arthur Dent writes 04/02/96

Gold Star! Whisperingly call
Out her name into the nights
Scared she may answer.

A child no longer
plays in the park. Lies on his
Back the head weeping.

So suddenly came
A winter's storm one night, then
Crossed her face to mine.

Dominic writes 04/01/96

Frost twenty below:
Some say it's the wind, some not
Frost and lies of spring.

Simple Simon writes 04/01/96

Magnetite/magnate
Tight; pyrite/pirate:- which is
It? Fool's gold/gold's fool?

ARTHUR DENT writes 04/01/96

Whisperingly call
Out her name into the night,
"Here Kitty, Kitty."

Awake and stretch to
Greet the dawn's light and to touch
Your dry lips to hers.


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