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The Toast Point Haiku Contest
The Best of 1996!


Welcome!

Oh! A contest! Yay!
The Toast Point Haiku Contest!
I shall enter it!
(PumaCat, October '95)

Toast Point writes: Here are the Sage's choices for Best Haikus of 1996. Most of them are gold star winners already, but some were not - a board review determined their worth after the first judging. Special thanks to Moonchilde, Laur, Stefan, and the Convivial Codfish for their suggestions. Enjoy, and congratulate the winners!


Table of Contents

Haikus on Haikus
Nature On the Water
Winter Autumn
Spring
Summer
Day In, Day Out Events of 1996
Making Love Life and Death
Felines Entertainment
Childhood Holidays
Philosophy Grin

Haikus on Haikus

Lowntlee Mackintosh writes 05/01/96

Haiku recipe -
Stop. Look. Capture the moment.
Add some seasoning.

Eirrab Snilloc writes 1/15

Winter poetry
Always makes me want to sneeze.
Haiku! Gesundheit!

Tim Scannell writes 03/29/96

Little poems fit
Tiny archipelago:
Japanese haiku.

Dale writes 09/10/96

Poetry just is.
Its appreciation is
The real miracle

Nature

Dale writes 07/15/96

Skyshadow's passage
Betrays a hunting eagle
This bright summer day

Barkley Collins writes 07/10/96

a cricket chirping
smiling Sayako silent
cool evening love song

Laur writes 09/17/96

Jewels of green and blue
treacherously sparkling cool
in a spider's eye

Eric Sapp writes 11/15/96

Wolves moan the distance
as winter sunset hovers
in white crested sky

Laur writes 10/14/96

Magnolia blossoms
caught by a spear of the sun
eclipse diamonds

On the Water

Don McLeod writes 1/12

Cold mountain morning
Glint of sunrise riding out
On the flyfish line

Kitamura writes 02/15/96

Birches grow both up
And, mirrored, down, as we drift
Noiselessly to shore.

Jo Koehn writes 03/25/96

Gulling and gliding
Winter white wings of freedom
Starboard and over.

Winter

Takimora writes 03/09/96

Bitten through mitten
By polar molar: Oh when
Will springtime be sprung?

John Sheirer writes 1/11

Before daybreak
Obsessive-compulsive neighbor
With a snow shovel

Laur writes 10/19/96

Following the sleet
shimmering ice-capped forests
greet the sun's first rays

Brian Dunphy writes 11/14/96

Snow on fallen leaves,
autumn pushed coldly aside
by hasty winter.

Autumn

We noticed that autumn leaves were a favorite haiku subject this year.

Andy Galdi writes 05/20/96

Autumn winds carry
The solitary bird's call
Easing loneliness

Hello Stark writes 05/20/96

Red, yellow and gold
Leaves are prettier dead, but
Most people aren't

Barkley Collins writes 07/18/96

fall fashion pages
scarlet red and bright yellow;
from my neighbor's tree

Emmett Williamson writes 08/27/96

trees shed leaves like tears
silent falling harbingers
autumn's last dance

Aiko writes 09/26/96

Autumn emerges
from the hot womb of summer
The trees shake with joy

Laurene P. Milder writes 09/15/96

Autumn red leaves twirl
northern crispness smells like snow
woodsmoke conjures home

Opalfire writes 10/05/96

Autumnal colors
tranquillize arboreal
disestablishment.

F. A. Mondo writes 10/02/96

the last yellow leaf
clings hard to the cold bare branch
lost yet unfallen

The poet also supplied a graphic for this haiku.

jkc..k writes 11/27/96

Crimson-tipped leaflets
Glazed in a feathery frost.
Crystalline sparkles.

Broderick AR Jones writes 11/21/96

Stepping into Fall
The leaves dance elegantly
Before my own eyes

Texas Teacher writes 11/16/96

Dry leaves, red and brown,
Tap dancing down the sidewalk:
Autumn's chorus line.

Spring

JO writes 03/14/96

Wind splitting thunder
Rolling off the broad prairie
Sounds the birth of spring

Aero writes 03/21/96

Green fingers emerge
Reach to the spring sky, begging
For the sun's warm hug.

Noel Kaufmann writes 09/23/96

Springtime, sharp and clean
Mountains have their eloquence
Promulgating green

John Mulder, the Netherlands writes 12/22/96

The early spring-light
after the wintry darkness
a gate burst open

Summer

Myotis Brown writes 02/19/96

These summer streetlights
Radiate a bright black broth
Of moths, gnats, and bats

John Sheirer writes 02/16/96

Humid summer
Paper in my printer sticks
So does my brain

Nancy Ayash writes 04/11/96

Droning honey bees
Labor in summer meadow
Frenzy and stillness

Clint Coker writes 08/20/96

cheap electric fans
swirl in false defense against
the east Texas heat

Day In, Day Out

John Sheirer writes 03/20/96

Very hard to find
For the fifth time this morning
The damn snooze alarm

Writerman writes 1/4

Quick morning kisses
Bedroom, bathroom, kitchen, then
Off to work we go.

Andie2u writes 03/11/96

Oh joy! The postman
Brings yet another sweepstakes
Sent by Ed McMahon!

Events of 1996

Agricola writes 03/31/96

"Had to kill my cow."
"What a pity." Was she mad?"
Didn't look too pleased."

Craig Chalquist writes 03/30/96

After the layoffs,
Parking spaces occupied by
Cold, shuffling leaves.

Collins7 writes 08/19/96

a huge gorilla
and a tiny baby boy
fell in love today

Making Love

Kristie writes 09/15/96

Take mine, it's for free
One of a kind, only mine
Sweet virginity

arni writes 02/09/96

Her luscious juices,
velvet peach still summer sweet,
rosy-warm with sun.

Myotis Brown writes 04/24/96

Under your fingers
The nectarines drop their skins
Like pale silk boxers

Thomas Lanier writes 05/31/96

I have seen your eyes
Reflect the fire in my heart.
May they ever burn.

Daniel writes 05/24/96

Dulce y rica,
Chocolate y manjar;
Eres mi postre.

The Sage apologizes for the following attempt at translation:
Sweet and rich,
Chocolate and tasty;
You are my dessert

Daniel writes 06/21/96

Tasting you beneath
Eucalyptus trees on a
Warm, sunny spring day.

Sir Robert of Rocher writes 10/31/96

Alas, Cynthia
I have heard thy voice gentle
And my heart doth melt.

Thulin Olivetti writes 10/11/96

a discovery
within the velvet of you
lie blossoms of silk

lg writes 12/02/96

eyes hold quiet reserve
we fall like rain together
puddles on the bed.

Harlem Renaissance writes 02/15/96

I thrust into her.
Hard, deep, smooth. Then I relax.
Slowly she deflates.

Life and Death

Collins7 writes 07/28/96

five lonely senses
and a sixth surrounding these
threadbare comforter

Kivas Fajo writes 6/4

Die Tage vergehen,
verglueht im Fegefeuer der Zeit.
Was bleibt ist etwas

Asche der Erinnerung
und ein suesser Duft, wie der
von Raeucherstaebchen.

Translation:
The days pass away,
burning in the purgatory of time.
What remains is some

ash of remembrance
and a sweet fragrance
as of incense-sticks.

Thomas Lanier writes 08/26/96

Frost's woods are lovely,
Dark and deep. But I too have
Promises to keep.

John Mulder, the Netherlands writes 09/17/96

Two elderly men
slow down their tortoise pace
a woman goes by

Jacques Navarro writes 12/26/96

at the funeral
her tombstone's shadow slowly
stretches to my feet

Moonchilde writes 12/03/96

We may be ions:
Birth's the anode; death, cathode -
Life's the spark between.

Felines

Takemochi writes 02/15/96

Why must you inspect
Each new thing that I bring home,
Impertinent cat?

Johanna writes 05/18/96

The plump cat waits with
Inexhaustable patience
For a hand to drop.

Entertainment

Collins7 writes 08/18/96

while TV is neat
I would rather eat nettles
than watch Jay Leno

The Artster writes 11/28/96

Kirk asks, "What is it?"
"Checking tricorder", says Spock.
Bones adds, "It's dead, Jim".

Childhood

Alfred L. Guy writes 12/13/96

children don't want much
juice, friends and sunsplashed playgrounds
so easy to please

Eric Sapp writes 12/07/96

Kicking piles of snow
With little navy blue boots
The boys home from school

Writerman writes 03/23/96

What ever happened
To the boy I used to be?
Would he like me now?

Holidays

Laur writes 10/19/96

Warm apple cider
ghosts and goblins at my door
fire on the hearth

Kevin DuBois writes 12/25/96

Little eyes alight
When colored boxes arrive
By way of chimney

Eric Sapp writes 12/19/96

every other car
hauls a freshly cut pine tree
or a dead deer

Philosophy

Ozymandias writes 03/29/96

Two trunkless legs of
Stone are more than YOU will leave
In two thousand years.

Hi Koo writes 1/11

Go inside your head
Rearrange the furniture.
Throw out all that hate.

Matsuhito writes 02/21/96

Beer bottle at curb
Shows "I Don't want a refund:-
Don't care anymore."

Fozawa writes 02/12/96

Dyslexagnostic,
I toss and turn, wondering
If there is a dog.

Barkley Collins writes 07/07/96

Spirit fills the heart
Heart lifts man to greater heights
Thought charts the process

Wendy Lee Klenetsky writes 07/31/96

"YOU ARE WHAT YOU EAT!"
That's what all the people say.
Then I guess I'm NUTS...

Clint Coker writes 08/20/96

One's belief neither
creates nor destroys the truth
God is or is not

Collins7 writes 09/14/96

Alvin Toffler coined:
"the battle for men's minds"
which side are you on?

Kathy Grover writes 09/05/96

Hope, like small embers,
Burns strong, hotter and brighter
Just before dying

Anonymous writes 10/20/96

Sex, drugs, heavy stuff
What is the world coming to?
Ha! The end, of course!

Wallis writes 11/08/96

Men dressed in suits with
August demeanors sometimes
Clothe December hearts

Liz Moore writes 10/09/96

Let loose the black past
Feel it fall, it's forgotten
Cover me with white

Grin

Kamiko writes 02/26/96

A bikini wax
Ensures he gets no cheap thrills:
No fringe benefits.

Rover writes 04/06/96

"BREAKFAST ANYTIME"
So I chose flapjacks during
The Enlightenment.

RSM writes 08/04/96

Words no longer flow
Like rivers flowing seaward:
My cursor is stuck.

Matthew Craven writes 10/21/96

A pair of aces
reflected in Dave's Raybans
I raise him fifty

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